Korni Work Blog Week 8

This week I had a lot of revising to do. The first thing that I did was call Jane. Her reviews of my document were not very good and I realized that I really needed her help to make the major changes that I needed to make.

I created a rough draft of what I wanted to do and the changes that I wanted to make within the document. She really liked my rough idea. She liked the simplicity of the design, and she also liked the bright color of the background. She said that it was closer to what they were looking for and was much more creative than my intial document. She did suggest some things to improve the font, like making it bolder and using a sans-serif font, instead of the serif font that I used. I changed the things that she asked, and I also took off the volunteer requirements and left on the job description. She approved of my final draft. I was glad that I was able to fully collaborate with her.

I put together the final document compilation for the group and posted it on the website. Then I finished my two assesment forms.