Instructor Blog #2: Email
I am always surprised at how lightly my freshmen students treat email with their professors. I worry that students, accustomed to using email for communication with friends, feel that email is merely a casual and informal medium. When these students hit the business world, where email can often have serious consequences, they will be in for a rude awakening. Because one of my goals for this course is to prepare you for the workplace (if you're not there already), I want to stress heavily that email in professional and academic environments is a serious communication format.
To help perfect your art of emailing, I included some fairly well known email tips here. Please follow all of these guidelines for every email you send in this class:
- Give every email a subject heading which is concise and direct. Never send a professional email without a subject line.
- Keep subject headings consistent throughout an email exchange, even if the subject of the exchange changes drastically. If the topic changes so drastically that the subject line no longer fits, it is probably time for a new email exchange.
- Include a greeting and conclusion in every email (Jodi - , Dear Bob, Hi Steve, etc). Make the greeting and conclusion appropriate to the tone of the email (Don't call your boss "Hey Dude," don't call a close co-worker friend "Dear Mr. Smith.")
- Do not forget to attach your files! I cannot overemphasize this. Students do this all the time. In this class, if you turn in a final assignment and forget to attach it on time, the assignment is late. My advice whenever you plan on sending an attachment is to open the email and attach the document first, then type. You are unlikely to forget to write anything, but you could easily forget to attach a document.
- Use formal but casual language (complete sentences, correct capitalization and punctuation, correct standard spelling, etc.) Email is cordial but professional, and the tone needs to match. So a message like "Hey Dude, B4 u leave 4 Vegas, don't 4get 2 fax that report! TTYL!" is not acceptable in a business environment.
- Don't use all CAPS in email. It is the virtual equivalent of yelling.
Businesses take email seriously, because it can have significant effects. Recently, some students of mine uncovered a case in London where a colleague requested via email that his friend replace a secretary with a "busty blond." The former secretary sued, and the company had to pay 30,000 pounds (about $60,000.) In 2001, the CEO of a company called Cerner sent out an email berating his employees for coming late and leaving early and threatened to fire all the managers in two weeks. When the email leaked to the internet, the company's stock dropped 22 percent in three days. Email is serious business, and it needs to be treated accordingly.
With that in mind, I want to offer some etiquette tips to remember in the class and on the job. Thinking twice about the emails you send could save you serious trouble. Above all else, I recommend that you treat EVERY email you send through a work account like your boss is reading it, like it could end up in the press, and like it could end up as evidence in court. I don't want to make you paranoid, but you should be aware that all of these outcomes are possible. Many companies have programs that monitor email for offensive language or disturbing keywords. And the Supreme Court recently ruled that companies must keep emails on file in case they are needed as evidence in court cases. So if you don't want an email on your boss' desk, on the front page of a newspaper, or as exhibit A in the courtroom, DO NOT SEND IT under any circumstances.
Secondly, think twice before you send anything. If you are about to ask a stupid question to your boss or professor, stop and think. Is the answer available somewhere else? Can you ask another colleague? Many people receive 100s of emails every day, and don't want to waste their time with pointless or unnecessary communications. So think about how every email will make you look - sending good email is an important part of a professional ethos, the credibility you have on a job. Sending bad emails with stupid questions or misspellings is going to make you look dumb. I don't want that to happen. Also think twice before sending an angry email. Never lose your cool in an email. You don't want your angry tirades on record. If you need to express anger or frustration, do so carefully and tactfully.
Also save important emails from colleagues and supervisors. Use the folder system in any email program to archive emails in an organized manner. Recently, I took a job indexing a book for an author. We agreed on a price by email, but by the time the work was done, he wanted to pay a significantly lower sum. I forwarded him the old email, which I had saved, and asked him if the price we agreed upon was still fair. I got all my money. If I wouldn't have saved the email, I would have lost a lot of money. The same thing is true on a job. If anyone ever delegates responsibility or reaches business agreements by email, save it. Then, when confusion arises later, you'll have a record of what was discussed. If you don't save it, there could be huge problems down the road.
I don't mean to sound crotchety or demeaning here, but it is vitally important that you start treating academic and professional emails seriously. If you don't, the consequences will catch up with you. Make good email etiquette a part of your professional identity. To help you, I will be less responsive to emails that don't follow the etiquette standards above. That will help you form good habits for later.
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Comments on Instructor Blog #2: Email
Every day when I get to work in the morning I look forward to reading my emails. I am not looking forward to the work they may delegate to me; I am looking forward to laughing at how terrible the majority of the emails were written. One thing I will say though, the higher up the chain of command the sender is, the better written the emails are. I look at some of the emails written by people in my group and I wonder how they ever get any responses. I can’t even begin to fathom how so many people seem to forget the subject to an email. How do you forget that? The subject is the second thing you fill out, and it is the key to your email getting read. If I receive an email without a subject it is the last email that will get read. If the person writing it could not take the time to fill out one line then they can wait until I respond to everyone else who added a subject. A missing subject just starts an email exchange on the wrong foot. Also, over half the emails I see don’t have a greeting or conclusion. An email without a greeting or conclusion makes the sender seem like they don’t care about work or the email they sent. However, as far as I am concerned both of these errors are pretty small in comparison to spelling and grammatical errors in emails. One email I saw today I did not even know what the person was asking. I could not believe my eyes when she actually got a response that was not asking her to try again. For as formal as emails should be it seems that many people still regard them as an informal medium. For this reason, I believe that giving emails a high priority in the workplace will get you noticed and will get you faster results and responses.
Response
I agree with everything that has been posted above. I have interned for three different companies since starting school. The companies have ranged from a small national company, to a large international Fortune 500 company. At each location I experienced a different e-mail environment. At the small companies, I as inundated with e-mails every five minutes with things that weren’t specific to me, and that were poorly written. The larger the company, the lass non-specific e-mails I received and the more formal and better phrased the e-mail was.
At my current place of employment, I receive about a tenth of my previous e-mail volume. Each e-mail I receive is phrased professionally and has a specific purpose. It’s a wonderful change from a multitude of unimportant e-mails.
I always enjoyed it when managers would send out e-mails with horrible punctuation and grammar errors. Now, I’m not perfect when it comes to grammar, punctuation or spelling, but at least I try. Every time I would receive an e-mail with things spelled wrong, or sentences that would go on forever, I would chuckle about the lack of education by my managers. This is not something I want people to when they see communication from me.
Response to email Problems
I would also agree with everything said on the original claim and the two previous statements. I believe excellent email etiquette is essential because this medium is similar to writing a letter (through snail mail), whereas people have tended to forget the purpose of this formality. I feel that email is the most formal of all possible forms of electronic written communication, so it should be addressed in a responsible and respected manner. From the two given examples, emails can also tie in the usage of professional ethics. When writing an email to either a person, or a small/large group of people, it is critical that you make your message clear and be careful of certain phrases, to avoid offending anyone.
From many emails in the past, I find it annoying when the writer would type as if they are talking because also every so often you would also encounter some instant messaging abbreviations, missing words, and misspellings. Even though you may understand the point of the message, the seriousness of the situation/urgency of the writer may be disproven, especially in a professional conduct. I have tried my best to compose each of my emails with care, as the points mentioned in the blog, which are related from basic writing skills.
I also agree with saving emails until you are completely sure that you do not need them anymore. Not only you have sources of past contacts, you also have evidence if any problems arise, and it also saves time with finding email addresses. This technique is a great record keeping technique, and has helped me on numerous occasions.
The way I view email, is that it is a reliable tool for electronic communication, and does not take much effort to be proficient with it. I believe most of the problems related to emails result from a lack of common sense, poor writing attempts, and can be simply corrected by taking time and reading over the message before clicking “send.”
Consequences
I totally agree when you say that you should think twice before sending out e-mails. There were a couple of guys at a past place of employment that did not know where to draw the line. I used to get e-mails from these guys joking around about upper management, blondes, etc. Not that I was disgusted every time - I actually did laugh at some of these e-mails. Nonetheless, I could not believe some of the things they would write. These e-mails were usually sent out to a certain group of younger employees thinking that all of the 'younger' ones would get a kick out of their jokes. It started winding down when some jokes were sent out about the war in Iraq. There were quite a few e-mails sent back saying how offensive the e-mails were. HR got involved, and from then on these guys should have realized that their e-mails would be tracked. The next bad e-mail involved a few quotes from a Family Guy episode about the "revolution." The company which we all worked for, a very large and powerful company I might add, did not take the "revolution" lightly. The gentlemen were walked out that same day and even questioned by a few authority figures. I could not believe that a simple string of e-mails could get someone fired so quickly; although I did agree that they should have learned their lesson, smartened up, and shut up. But they didn't. And so they got fired and walked out. It was a pretty big deal - it opened a lot of people's eyes and the 'joke' e-mails that use to clutter my mail box stopped pretty quickly. Basically, the consequences that can come from stupid e-mails are very drastic. I still, every once in a while, get some e-mails that I think, "Ohh, yeah that should not have been sent out," but what can you do? As long as you yourself are smart about e-mailing and joking around, you will be okay. Work e-mail is supposed to be used for work. Let's keep it that way.
Email response
I feel email etiquette is very important now-a-days. It seems people use email more than picking up the phone and calling the person. I too have worked and seen poorly written emails, as most people that have responded above me have. Sometimes, the subjects were very misleading and then I open it, waste my time reading the email, and it has nothing to do with me. This gets especially annoying when you have over 100 emails everyday, as noted in the blog. Poorly written emails were also a big problem. I am not the best at writing, (I hope to improve on this during this class), but I still know the basics and can catch mistakes easily, just not in my own work. Therefore, even the higher management were making silly mistakes, misspelling the easiest words and having sentence fragments to the point where the sentence doesn’t even make sense. I don’t know about everybody else, but when I read poor English, even swearing, in a serious email, I just start thinking that the author really doesn’t know what he/she is talking about and I don’t take the email serious.
My last point is about arguments in an email. I have read about a whole divorce taking place, and I really didn’t care about it, but every time something happened, email was used to gossip. The argument got old real quick, and eventually the person sending the email was reprimanded rightfully so. With this being said, I understand email is a serious business and I agree 100 percent with the blog.
Andrew Garland
Another reason to think twice...
A friend of mine once sent an angry e-mail to a co-worker about another colleague that had some harsh words in it, but not incredibly demeaning and in particular not trying to attack the person. The recipient forwarded my friends e-mail to their boss and after it had circulated, ended up in the hands of the colleague being complained about.
Because it was taken out of context, it was construed to be sexual harassment, and my friend nearly lost his job. It was never meant to come off that way, and that's what helped him save his job, but he shouldn't have sent the e-mail in the first place.
Emails
Everyone seems to have the same views on emails. I agree with the most of them. One of the first subjects talked about was the subject line. I think the subject line is SO important because I tend to get junk mail and if anything doesn't have a subject line and I don't recognize the email address that sent it, I discard it and delete it immediately fearing that it could be a virus. This could be bad for both me and the person that sent it if the email held important information. Bottom line, ALWAYS fill out the subject line and make it worthwhile so the person reading it has an idea of what they are about to read.
Secondly, I think that email etiquette is very important. It is very important to know what type of language to use depending on who you are talking to. I tend to make sure that I keep every email too formal when emailing people I don't know. I usually get a response back with "just call me Tarri, not Mrs. Brickler" or something of that nature. I then know where our email conversation boundaries are. It’s better to be safe, then sorry.
Lastly, a simple email introduction and closure goes a long way. When I receive emails that don’t start out “Dear Jason, or Jason-” it gives me the impression that the email isn’t very personal. The person didn’t take the time to fill out my name and that could mean it is just a generic email sent out to everyone. If an introduction is included, it makes the email seem more personal and I am more likely to pay closer attention to it. The same argument can be made for conclusions. They are especially necessary when you are emailing somebody for the first time. I may not know who packerfan@hotmail.com is, but if you include “-Tom-” at the end then I know who it is.
Good Advice
The articles in this instructor blog showing these real-world examples of email horror stories have been very eye-opening to me. Not that I'm totally ignorant to all this; I've just never heard of such horror stories. The court ruling requiring companies to archive their emails is also eye-opening news to me. I'm glad to know about that, and will relay that information to those I work with.
Thought I don't have any horror stories of my own, I have just recently taken note of and began using the email archive abilities of the email program I use at my internship. I've also noticed the many archive folders of those who have worked there for longer than I have. This only solidifies the information I have read here.
Blog #2 Response
When reading this instructor blog, I can’t even begin to emphasize how true the content is. When I started my internship at Caterpillar Inc. this summer, I even had to take a specific online training class just on emails. The class included about a half hour lecture on the importance of proper emailing at work followed by s twenty question assessment. When I started to read this blog, I felt like I was having dejavu. Though the online class training at Caterpillar was a little more extensive than this blog, all of the ideas were identical. The toughest part about our society today when getting started in the workforce is being able to change the way we communicate. All of our lives we have been sending emails, IM’s and text messages carelessly and casually. Once a person starts working, he or she must learn how to communicate on a different level then they are accustomed to. Especially in today’s world where legal action can be taken for any miscommunication or slip-up, such as the examples explained in the blog, one must be extremely careful about emails in the workplace. This blog certainly hits the nail on the head when conveying the seriousness of correct communication in today’s society. Now aside from all this seriousness, don’t let this intimidate you. For instance, my boss is an older man and typically with older people, they are a little behind with today’s technology. This means mistakes with email format or spelling errors do occur but we (the employees) don’t think any less of our boss because he makes mistakes. We all do. The point I’m trying to make is that as an employee, you just need to pay attention to what you are typing. Stop, think, then proofread before you send and this should never become an issue.
I Agree Based on My Experiences
I find the content of the posting as well as the responses to be true. Although I would not even think of sending indecent content over a work email, I have been guilty of sending with questions that could have been handled by other means. I cannot think of any interesting stories where that happened, but it is always a good idea to stop and think about what you are writing. From the postings I have read from the other students, there appears to be a decent level of maturity and professionalism in this group. I can relate to the stories others have with reading email at work from co-workers. One that stands out in my mind is an email regarding “praying for George Bush when the media attacks him” or something along those lines. I do not remember exactly what it said, but I was surprised that one of my co-workers had sent it and could see why some people could take offense to it since it had both religious and political themes in it. At any rate, I agree with the text and comments I read.
Blog #2 Response
I have experienced some similar issues regarding emails in my past internships. Based on the hours of training and policies that I had to go over in the begining weeks of my internships, I know that all of the things written in the blog are true. In fact, the training at my last company, and the one I am interning at now, basically stated the exact same thing. Emails within the professional world are not something to be taken lightly. It is very important that they are clearly written and titled to minimize confusion and maintain credibility. And most important, they should not be written in a way that might insult or offend anyone. Even a minor joke that might seem harmless to one person can be very offensive to others, and result in serious consequences. Every single email that was ever sent within the company was saved and could be used as incriminating evidence.
Last summer, I was interning for a very large company. There were a lot of other interns at this company, who would often socialize over email, and even use work emails as if they were instant messages, sending emails back and forth all day long. And, the content of these emails was not always appropriate for work. People would send emails taking about recent parties and how certain people got drunk, and what they ended up doing. Whenever I received an email like this (seeing how I was an intern and was included in the intern email distribution list), I would just think to myself "seriously? Are people really dumb enough to send these kinds of emails through work?" But, they were. To my knowledge, none of these emails had ever been viewed by anyone other than an intern, so no one had ever gotten into any kind of trouble for sending them. But, just imagine if some other employee had seen them and was offended, or if someone in HR found them.
My Comment
Wow, this blog really caught my attention and made me think! It almost scared me a little, because I realized that I need to make sure my emails appear professional. Before I enter the real world, I hope I can master the etiquette of writing accomplished emails because I do not want to look bad when writing to a boss or coworker. I am currently working in a very serious atmosphere and when it is time for me to email others; I always take longer than usual and wonder how to make my phrases sound better and more professional. This is a task that I will continue to perfect throughout my job and this course!
I totally agree
I totally agree with you about how our generation uses email so casually and informally. I believe that email is going to become even bigger in professional world in the coming years than it is now. I feel this way because technology is always increasing and it someday will allow for business to be done without even communicating with each other or signing agreement papers. I think your lists of helpful email tips have set accurate guidelines for the way that emails should be sent not only in an academic setting, but a professional one as well. I have had some personal experience with how email can be beneficial and also how it has backfired on me.
Last summer I was working in the human resources department at an insurance company and part of my job was to send my reports to upper management and the CEO when I complete with them. The CEO emailed me back very shortly after he had read my report and was very pleased with my findings. He used informal language and incomplete sentences to get his point across but it was relaxing to know that even CEO’s can use informal language and be relaxed through email. Another time I wasn’t so lucky. I emailed a manager in a different department and addressed her as Mrs. Kelly So and so, when it was really a man and his name was Kelly as well. He proceeded to tell my boss and my boss explained that I was an intern so it all worked out.
I definitely agree with the statement of think twice before you send anything because as we have all seen over the past decade numerous scandals have been uncovered through email. I think this class is more meaningful than anyone I have taken yet because of its ability to relate to real world experiences and preparation for our professional lives. As students we sit in our calculus classes and our communications classes where we learn things we may never need to now or deal with again. But things as simple as sending proper and professional emails are vitally important to our personal success in the future.
Instructor Blog #2 Response
Email etiquette is very important. It does seem that email has replaced a lot of telephone and face-to-face conversations, particularly among co-workers. Unfortunately some people still write emails as if they were a casual conversation. This can make them hard to follow, especially if they show no concern for punctuation or formatting. And it is definitely important to include a subject on every email. Many email programs automatically sort out emails with no subject as possibly containing a virus.
I can relate to all the people mentioning jokes and inappropriate things being circulated through emails. I get tired pretty fast of getting jokes and chain emails forwarded to me. It's equivalent to junk mail in your mailbox. If you're someone who continually sends jokes and useless information, people are going to start ignoring you and might miss it when you actually send something important. I agree that, at least at work, you should treat every email like it could end up in the media or courtroom. Would you want your dirty jokes and nasty comments about other coworkers broadcast on the news?
Email in the workplace is
Email in the workplace is far from secure, and anyone can read it if they wanted to. I was always warned by my father, to watch what you say. Even a joke with someone you know can be misunderstood by someone that doesn't know you are kidding around. Personal information and harsh language is the last thing you want to type into an email of any kind.
It bugs me to this day, when I receive work email from 40+ year olds without subjects and headings. If you don't know someone, you must be so very professional, and say "hello Ben" or something to that order. Say thanks at the end, not just your first name. It amazes me how there are so many people that don't do these simple things... They must not have taken Technical Writing with Mr. Weber!
John Dumakowski
Email
I agree with everything that has been written above. I have interned for 4 summers now with several different types of companies. At each company though you usually see a trend through emails and how high up the person is on the professional ladder. The higher up the better written the emails usually are. Although there are those few who are just terrible no matter what. Email is important part of communication within a company and outside of one. You hold up your reputation and the company’s reputation you work for. It is interesting to see even with yourself how interaction with email is. If your relationship is formal such as a boss or a professor it is written quiet differently than if you were to write it to a friend. I believe that emails are a part of communication that people have become to casual with.