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This week I was responsible to revise the flyers. As soon as I got the instructor’s feedback on the flyer, I revised everything according to his feedback, such as rearranged spaces between sentences on the upper part of the flyer. Also, after I got feedbacks from the client, I tried to revise all mistakes, such as the event’s name and a sentence in the flyer. Unfortunately I got more problems. The client said that she did not want any dark background color. It was a big problem for me because I had to change the whole design in the flyer if I want to change the background color.

In this week seven, our group got some comments and suggestions from other group and the instructor. There is no major problem in both flyer and brochure. Most of the comments are positive comments. I was responsible for the flyer since I am the one who made the first draft. I searched the fonts online and the downloaded them. They turned out pretty good. Everybody loved it. The fonts give more emotion and spooky feeling to the readers. I got problem on the Tantalus logo on the brochure.

5:00 Appeal to emotion: Our brochure design strikes an emotional chord with our prospects. We put a lot of different good pictures and most of them are very dramatic, which help us to put some feelings to the readers too. Score for this step is +
4:00 Be professional: I think our brochure is very professional. We used only good quality photos and graphics. Also, we have a really nice template and design too. Another + score for our brochure.

Attached are draft 2 for the flyer and brochure.
Group 2-

This week, first drafts for the brochure and flyer are due. My group followed our Gantt chart to do the drafts. I was responsible for the whole draft of the flyer. I totally changed the design of the old brochure. I think the old brochure is not attractive. I put a more interesting and dramatic picture and rearranged the information in a better way. I also emailed Ms. Lind about the sponsors for this event. She said that there was no sponsor to be included in the flyer. The other group members were responsible for the brochure draft.

I realize that sentence variety keeps writing lively and effective. It will be bored to read successive sentences of equal length and type with the same structure. Based on my observation on the flyer draft, there is not much sentence in there. The only sentence which is “We dare you to join us…” is rather ineffective, but its purpose is to give some feeling to the readers about the theatre. It is a dramatic sentence and actually persuasive too. On the brochure draft, I do not think there is a boring sentence.

Here are our 1st draft flyer and brochure.
Group 2--

This week, my group (group 2) has finished the Gantt chart for our final project.

Attached is Gantt chart for group 2.

http://www.bpdweb.com/gpyd/gpydb.pdf