English 421K, Technical Writing

hello group I emailed you this document at 1:50 a.m. on friday morning. If you have problems opening it please let me know. I used Microsoft Publisher and created a brochure. I am looking for any feedback you can give me in this document. This is the first peer review i have had on this document!!! thanks Evan Schafer

My document is two separate Word documents (Page 1 and Page 2 are separate files)

Please make your comments in a text file; don't use the Track Changes option because I'm afraid it will mess up the formatting (which took forever, lol)

This is written with the idea of it being a double-sided, laminated guide that is handed out to new students who are touring the PMU. I left the second floor out because there is nothing up there that would really concern new students.

Thanks!

I did things a little differently. My documents are websites. There are links between the two that will hopefully help navigating. I'd really appreciate any input posted as a reply to this blog entry.

http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~hartmand/pmu.html

Thanks,

Dave H.

I have converted my InDesign File into .pdf form and it is attached. You will need Adobe Acrobat Reader to open this file. For your peer review, could you please do it in a list format being sure to specify where on the brochure your comment pertains to. If you run into any problems, please let me know ASAP.

Thanks,

Dave