English 421K, Technical Writing

Over all, I think that this is a good pamphlet. I like the pictures that show how/what to do next to the written instructions. Important warnings and safety information is repeated multiple times throughout the text. The instructions are clear, an the designs are appeasing. On thing I did notice though was that at the very beginning, it mentions that the set should be 6 feet away from any other structure, yet in the sample picture it is two feet away from a concrete wall. That could be misleading. The tables make the steps easy to follow, and it all flows along in order of assembly. The warnings come first, as they should, but could be a little bolder, or made to look more important and eye-catching. And there is a little redundancy in those warnings, such as mentioning how the equipment will be slippery, and then a whole new line directing against using the equipment when wet, that could be made into one line.