Amber Worman - Swing Set

Page 5 - Image at the top is too small. It would be very useful if it were larger.

Page 6 - The table format is consistant, but looks very odd. Not many instructions use this format.

Page 6 - The picture in step 4 is helpful to show what the swing set should look like "at this stage."

Page 7 - The first image could be a little larger to see what the "hands" are actually doing.

Page 9 - This layout is the best one so far. It has clearly labeled pictures of everything anyone would need to know about.

Page 10 - Close-ups are helpful on this page. Some other pages should use pcitures like these.

Overall, I think the table format fails in this instruction manual. It just doesn't work well; the pictures of the hardware in one column are so much larger than the pictures of the actual swingset. Perhaps if the text and images were vertically aligned within the cells, and the table lines were hidden, it might look better.

Submitted by BlueSkyy on Mon, 06/02/2008 - 10:25. categories [ ]