Wilson: Webmail Project - Rough Draft

I'm unable to post the document here, as it's too large, but you can click here to download it from my Purdue web account. It's in Word format, which will make it easier on you all if you want to use "Track Changes" and comment directly on the document. Otherwise, you're free to leave comments here.

I'd like to know what you all think. Granted, some parts are unfinished, and I definitely need to revise the wording in some areas, but I'd like to hear your opinions. Do I have enough information? Is it consistent enough throughout? Do I need more/less in some areas?

I'm looking forward to hearing/reading your comments. Smiling

Thanks,
Erin

Submitted by eawilson on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 07:36. categories [ ]

I like what you've done with

Submitted by LanaRyan on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:05.
I like what you've done with yours, you're able to present information and pictures yet still keep it looking organized and nice. There are some parts that could be revised, but I see that you have notes on those parts anyway. so, I guess just keep working on what you're doing!

Web Mail - ALB

Submitted by ALBradley on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:13.

-At first glance this looks very well organized and well put-together.
-PURDUE UNIVERSITY WEBMAIL: REST OF THE TITLE HERE
"Your Portal to the Academic World?" (Everyone loves a pun.) haha.
-"display Webmail in your native language" for some reason this doesn't sit entirely right with me. You may want to just refer to it as your "preferred" language or something.
-In your second graphic, I'm not sure where the toolbar is, or what it is. The web one or the choices above the inbox? I see it's explained later on, but I'd already stopped to be confused on this graphic.
-There is a lot of great information here and it is laid out in a linear and clear way. However, I'm not sure this is supposed to be a comprehensive explanation of every feature, so you may want to pare down some of the more detailed explanations. For example, I don't think you need to explain how to send an email. They can google "c.c." if they need to. Also, the options section takes up a lot of your space. You may want to omit some of the specifics.

Webmail

Submitted by dbartrom on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:30.
I like what you have done with your paper! I read through it, and it seemed to flow really well and made sense. The only thing I did not like was under the Compose section where it said:

Cc: Address(es) of secondary (or Bcc: Address(es) of secondary (or

The (or makes it kind of confusing on both of them.

edit

Submitted by cslarson on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:34.
This is a great deliverable. you obviously put a lot of time into it and it shows. other then the other comments made the only thing i can ask is if you are going to put text in the search and address book section as well as the problem/help section. otherwise this is fabulous.