Andrew Swart - Web Mail Technical Description

Attached is my Web Mail technical description.  Please help me either shorten or lengthen it so that the document is closer to either two or three pages long.  Any other suggestion will be appreciated of course.  Thanks.

Submitted by aswart on Wed, 05/28/2008 - 22:16. categories [ ]

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:05.
Good work, but add more pictures or information to stretch it out.

Allen revision of Swart Webmail

Submitted by shrapnel on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:18.
My comments are in the attached file in track changes.

swart webmail

Submitted by sludingt on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:35.
my changes are attached using track changes.