Amber Worman - Web Mail project

Here's my Web Mail project - it's a Power Point (.ppt) so you can just open it up and go through the presentation if you'd like. (Not sure if we are supposed to post comments...)
Submitted by BlueSkyy on Wed, 05/28/2008 - 21:29. categories [ ]

Hartmann - Peer Critique

Submitted by hartmand on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:16.
Great design, I really like the use of visuals and your layout choices. There are a couple slides, specifically Compose, Folders, and Search, where I felt overwhelmed by the column of text. I understand you probably went to the two column layout to change things up a bit; but perhaps making the text slightly smaller and breaking up those paragraphs would help. Finally, I was slightly confused in the Empty Trash slide, primarily because I don't have that option in my tool bar. I don't recall ever having one either...weird.

Toth - Webmail Revision

Submitted by dgtoth on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:26.
I also was kind of thrown off by the empty trash button- it most likely was a maintenance I opted out of. Anyway, overall Amber, great job. Very informative and easy to navigate. One comment regarding navigation- most if not all of the 'Home' buttons would send me to next slide. If you got this worked out the slide show would be seamless. Regarding content, I felt as if the compose and folders slides were a little dense. If you could break them down into more of a step process it would be so much easier to read and understand.

Schafer: peer review

Submitted by eschafer on Thu, 05/29/2008 - 10:44.
I also would like to know where my empty trash button is? lol anyways the powerpoint did a good job laying out all the different information and your table of contents was a good idea to direct them where they need. I felt like i got through all of it very well, i don't think the sections that they talk about are to long but the idea of maybe making the font smaller and and breaking it up in paragraphs is a good idea. On a project like this its better to be more descriptive than to not have enough information.