Bradley - SSinfo

Attached is my SSinfo assignment. It's in Word, please let me know if this is an issue. I appriciate your feedback, sorry these got up so late!
Submitted by ALBradley on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 19:02. categories [ ]

ssinfo doc

Submitted by cslarson on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 21:14.
i was using Word 2003 so i couldn't use track changes. I don't think your title looks uniform, i think you should use all caps. the website in the second line isn't uniform, use all lower case I think you have excellent content but i think you could do to add more visuals in your paper. I would be careful about how you write SSINFO.

Hello, I use OpenOffice,

Submitted by eawilson on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 21:42.

Hello,

I use OpenOffice, so I'm not able to get the stuff in Word format for you. Hope you don't mind that I post comments here.

1) S.S. Info, SS Info, and the like should be changed to SSINFO to reflect what the website lists it as.
2) URLs shouldn't have capital letters typically unless they are filenames; therefore, I'd recommend changing the URL in your intro paragraph to an all lower-case format.
3) I do think that the way you have utilized the image (for Academic) is helpful. It keeps things all in one place and will help the reader understand where specific things are. Kudos for that! I like it. You might want to try to incorporate it into the other two sections to keep it consistent throughout.
4) I think the document overall could benefit from being flushed out a little bit more. It's pretty general as is and might benefit from more information; however, what you have on your side in a shorter format - new students probably don't want to read a lot of information. It could seem complicated. I personally would like to see it longer, but that's a personal decision up to you.

Good start.

Erin