Mike Shaw - PMU Description Draft- Group 2

I'd welcome any feedback on the format, content, and use of pictures. Ok so my draft is too large for attaching...so...I'm gonna try e-mailing them to you guys... e-mail sent, I suppose e-mail me back your responses and I'll send them to mark all at once.
Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 09:25. categories [ ]

Andrew - PMU Revision

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:39.
Idea is good. Good information about the summer session food! Could be organized better with pictures and information. I recommend that the pictures be made smaller and that the text be wrapped around them. Good idea don't be afraid to add more information. Once you shrink the pictures I think you'll find that you have more room. Also I sent my revisions to your e-mail account. let me know if you have problems opening it. -- Andrew

Allen revision of Shaw UNION

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 16:20.
I don't have a lot of suggestions. I think the whole thing is good. The big pictures look great. It's takes up quite a few more pages than mine, but it would be very useful to someone deciding where to eat. Just finish putting the menus on.

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 17:05.
I think the pictures could be shrunk down a bit and organized better. I would also find some more information to add.