Mike Shaw - SSINFO Description Draft - Group 2

Attached is the SSINFO Description Draft. I'd welcome any feedback on the organization and image usage.
Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 05:57. categories [ ]

Revisions SSINFO

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 08:45.
I reattached your file with track changes turned on, so my comments are on the document. Let me know if you have any questions about anything. thanks! Sara

Revised SSINFO Description

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:01.
I realize that this is a draft so some of the things I pointed out may be obvious to you when you look at them. However, I do advise referring to your illustrations. Having them there is helpful, even though they are small they should give the reader an idea of what to look for at a glance. -- Andrew Peter Swart Mechanical Engineering Technology Purdue University (317)610-9221

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:15.
Your organization looks fine to me, but I offered some suggestions about the images.

Allen revision of Shaw SSINFO

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:39.

My comments are on the file. The simple sentence structure works well with the large pictues. Just review my suggestions and see if they are worth putting into place.