Ludington - SSINFO Rough Draft

Here is my rough draft of SSINFO user guide. I would like feedback about my use of images and any tips you could offer about how to tie it up in a conclusion section. It seems odd to me to just write "conclusion" as a header like I have other headers, but I'm not sure what to title it so that it would tie in. I would appreciate any suggestions. I would also like any other general comments on organization, grammar, etc. Thanks! Sara
Submitted by sludingt on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 22:00. categories [ ]

Andrew Swart - SSINFO Revision

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:36.
I like how you displayed your document and incorporated the pictures. One thing that i recommended in the document was not to keep explaining how to login to gain access to each tab. Also, a simple conclusion would be sufficient. I wouldn't label it "Conclusion" or anything. Just make another paragraph and say something like "If you need anymore information regarding SSINFO contact the Student Help desk at (###)###-####." Add something more if you feel it is necessary. -- Andrew Peter Swart Mechanical Engineering Technology Purdue University (317)610-9221

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:38.
I really like the layout and the images all seemed fitting and well placed. I'm not sure that a conclusion is needed.

Ludington - SSINFO Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 14:56.
My comments are in the track changes options in the document.

Allen revision or Ludington SSINFO

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:27.

I think the writing and pictures are really good. At first, I almost couldn't find anything to comment on.

I think that separating out paragraphs might help look/flow a little. Also, check out my suggestion for a conclusion at the end.

Other than that, a well written paper.