Dechow - SSINFO

Here is my SSINFO revised copy. I'd like feedback on where to place the images/general layout. Thanks.
Submitted by mdechow on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 18:28. categories [ ]

SSINFO revisions

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 09:03.
Hi I reattached your file with the changes I made in the word document using Track Changes. If you have any questions about anything, let me know! Thanks! Sara

Andrew - SSINFO Revision

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 14:09.
Good use of pictures. Along with the revisions attached I would recommend labeling your illustrations as "Figure 1, 2, 3" and then refering to them in context. This would just help to clarify what the reader is reading. -- Andrew

Allen revision of Dechow SSINFO

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:14.

Overall, the paragraphs seemed a little long. I think breaking it up would help the reader get through it. The pictures were good, but some were really small in comparason to the rest. Just balance it out, and you should be fine.

Dechow - SSINFO Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:46.
My comments are in the track changes option.