Andrew Swart - SSINFO

Attached is my SSINFO user guide. I am aware that the picture is small, however its purpose is not to be detailed but more as just to give the reader an idea of what to look for when logging on. Thank you.
Submitted by aswart on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 12:21. categories [ ]

swart - ssinfo revisions

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 09:32.
Hi - I reattached your file with track changes revisions made. I didnt have many comments, I just feel like your guide seems still in the very beginning stages. You have lots of broad ideas with few details and only 1 picture. If you only want 1 picture, you could maybe look at the style of your paper, it could be better laid out as just a 1 column paper and not in 2? let me know if you have any questions. thanks! Sara

Andrew Swart - SSINFO Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:28.
I also used the track changes option.

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:46.
I believe that this description could benefit from a more in-depth look at some of these features as well as more than one image.

Allen revision of Swart SSINFO

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:51.

I don't have a problem with the brievety of it. However, it needs more and bigger pictures. A quick read with good pictures would work great. Maybe to a front/back one page to give you room for the pictures.

I put a few other comments on the track changes.

Attached file

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 15:53.
I had trouble with the file attachment. Here is try #2.