Andrew Swart - PMU

Attached is my PMU welcome guide. Please give me recommendations on the pictures as to their locations and if more/less is needed. Thank you.
Submitted by aswart on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 12:16. categories [ ]

Allen revision of Swart PMU

Submitted by shrapnel on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 16:14.
I already helped you go over the text version, so I focused my comments on the layout and formatting. Check out the track changes comments.

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 17:01.
Looks pretty good so far. Perhaps you could move the images around a little and expand the conclusion.

Swart - PMU revisions

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 19:52.
Hi - I reattached your file. I like your choice of Images, but I would consider repositioning them farther apart on the pages maybe, so that they dont interfere with one another. I think you went over things pretty well, but could add a few more details and make it slightly longer. I like how you went through floor by floor though. Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks! Sara

Andrew Swart - PMU Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 21:37.
My comments are in the track changes option.