Bartrom - PMU Technical Description

Attached is the document containing my PMU Technical Description.
Submitted by dbartrom on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 11:58. categories [ ]

Hello, Attached is my

Submitted by eawilson on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 08:20.

Hello,

Attached is my response in Word format. If you have any questions, let me know, and I'll get back to you as soon as possible.

Thanks,
Erin

revision

Submitted by cslarson on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 22:32.
i had trouble viewing your project so i will simply have to agree with the wilson's comments.

Great layout, and wonderful

Submitted by LanaRyan on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 10:29.
Great layout, and wonderful information. it's easy to read, and not over-bearing. I think it could use a little more though, maybe add some more info. Seems a little short.

PMU

Submitted by ALBradley on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 23:43.
I had trouble opening it, too. I used the link to the version with comments, I hope you don't mind! There is a lot of great information here, but I think it could benefit from a more obvious organization. For example, the restaraunt information seemed a little congested. Maybe try adding grid lines or spacing out more? In the same way, the information that followed was confusing at a glance. I would suggest not putting spaces between titles and sections to help clarify. Just try playing around with different text organizaion.