Daniel Bartrom - SSINFO

Attached is the file containing my technical description of SSINFO.
Submitted by dbartrom on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 11:43. categories [ ]

Hello, I've attached a

Hello,

I've attached a Word document with changes and comments to this comment for your convenience. If you have any questions, let me know.

Thanks,
Erin

I like you you've organized

I like how you've organized the paper and have clearly defined steps. I would work with sizing and text wrapping a little though, to reduce the amount of whitespace you have on some pages. Or center some of your graphics. And I agree with Erin on the closing statement, it ends rather abruptly.

comments

I think your title might be a little long. you could perhaps get rid of the "for incoming students" The note at the end of page one runs onto the second page. i don't think you need a picture of the left tabs at every different section. i like the use of screen shots for ease of use and getting through the guide.

Response to SSINFO

You have a lot of great information here. The steps are very specific and easy to follow. However, I'm not sure who your audience is. If this is aimed at college students, they may not need the steps broken down to such minutia. The pictures make the explanation very clear, but I'm not sure that you need to repeat the heading and subcategory pictures for more than one heading. Students will get the idea after seeing one example. Very thorough.