Allen - Union fun

Please pay attention to the general formatting as well as the intro and conclusion. Of course, all other insight is appreciated.

Submitted by shrapnel on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 11:35. categories [ ]

Andrew - PMU Revision

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 16:49.
Eccellent layout and wording. There are a few spots I pointed out that are a little wordy but for the most part I wouldn't think you will have to do to much to this one. Certainly wouldn't touch the Intro or Concl other than not titling the Conclusion. Good Luck! -- Andrew

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 17:18.
The layout looks pretty good and the images are well placed. I just had a few minor suggestions.

Allen - PMU Revision

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 20:07.
Hi - I thought yours was really well done. . . some confusion with the usage of "it's" I think its supposed to be its with no apostrophe. . . .I like your pictures, consider separating them some to break up monotonous areas. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks! Sara

Allen - Union Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 21:03.
My comments are in the track changes options.