Allen - SSINFO Essentials

Please pay special attention to the introduction and conclusion, in addition to anything else you find.

Submitted by shrapnel on Thu, 05/22/2008 - 11:34. categories [ ]

Allen - SSINFO Revision

Submitted by sludingt on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 09:22.
Hi- I reattached your file with track changes turned on. Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks! Sara

Allen - SSINFO Comments

Submitted by mlshaw on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:12.
I also used the track changes option.

Revisions

Submitted by mdechow on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 13:59.
Good layout and use of your images. I think the conclusion could use a bit of work though.

Andrew - SSINFO Revisions

Submitted by aswart on Fri, 05/23/2008 - 14:31.
Introduction seems adequate. The only think I noted about the conclusion was the title. I wouldn't include this because of the appearance. Its just not necessary. Also include labels on the pictures and use them in readings. -- Andrew