Larson Revision Challenge

This article is pretty much awful for younger readers. The title is boring and doesn't spark interest or catch the readers eye. It should stand out a bit more with color or font. The article itself is plain black text, no spacing, running on and on. The text should be spaced out a little bit more to make it easier for teenagers to read. The article definetly needs some pictures to help make the article less bland. I think that maybe two columns would help the readablility a bit. I think the information is good and will be understandable by the younger readers.
Submitted by cslarson on Wed, 05/21/2008 - 08:50. categories [ ]