English 421K, Technical Writing

Lois is concerned that those who need to read the document most might not read the document carefully enough to get the useful information from it. The most important section "Management Options" is buried deep into the document. I think it should be brought forward to fit right after "Identification and Biology". "Stings" should also be moved toward the end of the document so that it can be more consistant with the gray boxes. This document is crying out for color in at least the existing picture and boxes. However, sometimes all that is available is a black and white printer.