English 421K, Technical Writing

First of all, I'm very sorry for not being in class today. My apartment lost power during the night and my alarm did not go off. I'm sorry if I disrupted the group work in any way. Here are my usability question, but I am having problems with the site attatching my actual paper. If I could get emails from you I will be willing to send you all a copy. Is the manual easy to follow? Is the "lingo" or language understandable? Did you personally learn something from this paper? Do you thing most people would?

I have attached word documents of my User Guide and my usability questions.

Thanks!

Attached are my rough draft and questions. It was done in word 2008 so if there are big formatting issues keep in mind it went through a rollback.

Thanks! 

Attached is a draft of my instruction project. My usability questions are as follows: 1. Were you able to effectively perform this task? 2. Do you feel that the pictures were helpful? 3. What, if anything, would you change about the pictures? 4. Were any of the steps unclear? 5. Any other suggestions about the layout?

Attached to this post are three files. 1. My usability questionnaire 2. My introduction (parts list, required tools, etc.) 3. My assembly instructions

Please use the questionnaire to give me feedback. The "Intro" file is rough, so feel free to help me improve the design of it.

Attached is a draft of my instruction manual.

Some questions that I'd like answered are:

1.) I provide a description and image to help clarify many topics. Are there areas that need an image or better descriptions? Do I need to use examples of my descriptions?

2.) Did you feel like the manual followed a proper logic in the format and presentation of information? Where could it use improvement? What can I change?

3.) The pawn is kind of a tricky unit to explain, how did you feel after reading that section? Anything I can improve on?

Attached is my Instruction set along with my usability questions. I look forward to hearing what you have to say.

Attached is my instruction draft with usability questions below.

1.Do you feel you could succesfully perform this preflight?
was it simple?
straightforward?
2. Do you understand the purpose of the walk around?
3. Is this list format easy to read?
easy to follow along?
easy to keep your place?
4. Other then knowing exactly what specific components look like, is anything unclear or confusing?
5. Would component pictures be helpful?
6. Are the instructions to light or too dense?
7. Do you get the sense that this is an important step in operating an aircraft?
8. Any other comments?

Attached is a .PDF of the booklet I want to produce for this project. I've also attached a .DOC file of the usability questionnaire that I've made up. Feel free to answer the questions on the .DOC and attach it in a reply to me.

Thanks!
Erin