Corporate Project Revision

Here is my revision for the corporate project. I am submitting both the press release and the letter to the customer for revision and they are in that order in the attached pdf.

Revision Notes:

Attached is my revised corporate project.

Here are my revisions to the Corporate Project. It is saved in PDF format.

The first page is the Press Release and the second page is the letter.

Revision Notes:

Press Release
-I did a major revision on the whole document basically
-Deleted the first paragraph and moved the second paragraph up
-I changed "sat on the John F. Kennedy.." to "sat at.."
-Changed everything to 3rd person instead of 1st person
-Fix runway by making it into one word instead of two

Here is my revised corporate project.

Attached is my revised Corporate Project with revision notes.

Thank you,
Jovan

Good evening,

Attached is my Corporate Project Revision as a PDF file. It contains my press release, letter, and a bulleted list of my revisions; respectively.

Thanks,
Elizabeth Bruinsma

Attached as a PDF file is my press release and the itemized list of the things changed.

Press Release Changes:

• “. . . keep flights on scheule” - to schedule
• The plural of aircraft is aircraft, not aircrafts. - changed to aircraft
• The plural of crisis is crises, not crisises. - changed to crises
• Affect is the verb; effect is the noun. - changed to affect
• Cannot is one word. - changed can not to cannot

Attached are my revised press release and letter for the Corporate Project.
Sheila