Employment Revision

Attached you will find my revised Resume and Cover Letter, as well as the job ad that i failed to give along with it. Thank you.

Good evening,

I have attached my revised employment project as a PDF file. It contains my cover letter, resume, and corrections; respectively. I have listed my corrections as a bulleted list.

Thanks,
Elizabeth Bruinsma

Attached is a pdf file of my revised resume and cover letter.

Jovan.

Here is my revision. I revised the resume, the cover letter, as well as the questions I did not answer in the job ad analysis. I also made sure to check the link from the pdf and I know for sure that the link to the job ad is working this time.

Attached as a pdf file is my revised Cover Letter, Resume, and the itemized list of things changed for both.

The revised copy of my Employment Project is attached. I have revised the cover letter and resume without making use of Purdue's OWL resources. I have not changed the heading of the cover letter per the instructor's blog post of July 8, 2008. I found a person to address my letter to (Sharon L. Allen) and I added the date. I corrected the first and second sentences so they flow together.

Attached is a copy of my revised employment project.

Attached is a revised version of my resume and cover letter in .pdf format. Below is a description of the changes that I have made. I did not make use of OWL's online or on-site tutoring.

Cover Letter
- Researched more deeply on company website and found the Executive Director's name: Julie Echard.

Attached are my revised resume and cover letter.

Attached as a PDF is my revised cover letter and resume.

Thanks.
Brett