The document has good content and explains the product's
technical specifications well. However, I think the color scheme and font
choices need some work. The font under the Amazing Features heading is difficult
to read and capitalization is inconsistent. Also, I think you need
to choose color shades that contrast more. With a digital photo frame you
want the document to look sharp and focused to reflect on the product’s
characteristics. Light blues, light yellows, and your font styles don't
exactly convey that. I think you
should consider using the color white and then contrasting it with darker shades
of red, yellow, blue, and black.
Submitted by kaythegeneral on Mon, 07/28/2008 - 22:07.
The first aspect of the document that struck me as impressive was the color
scheme. It is very eye catchy and seems to be consistent with the Kodak ads
that I have seen in the past. Some of the document fonts are not the most easy
to read; these fonts give a different feel to the document, almost a colloquial
feel and could maybe contribute something to use preferences. I think that this
document style, while somewhat unsure, of a small pamphlet, leaflet, or
brochure would be appropriate for a customer buying the product or considering
this product versus a competitor.
There was an excellent job done describing what is included with the
purchase for the customer. The technical specifications section was done very
well and this section outlined many of the important requirements for this
product. One can easily tell that there was a lot of research put into this
document.
When looking at the title page, I like the images that are there, but really
feel that this type of product and this project in its display style could use
some sort of catchy slogan. This could really improve the reader response to
the document.
As far as seeing the audience for this document, I don’t see a particular
audience being effectively used but instead to all users or customers of the
product. There is not too much technical information to be had in the document
and could use more or less depending on whom you are trying to target to buy
the product, elderly, children, adults, tech savvy people, novices, etc.
Overall, the team did a nice job preparing their first draft and are on
their way to a great document.
Overall the project had a very good layout, reading the reviews flowed nicely. The background was exelent and did not draw too much attention away from the content.
Project Proposal + Document Specificaitons
Peer Review Draft
Easyshare W1020 and W820 Brochure
Peer Review
The document has good content and explains the product's
technical specifications well. However, I think the color scheme and font
choices need some work. The font under the Amazing Features heading is difficult
to read and capitalization is inconsistent. Also, I think you need
to choose color shades that contrast more. With a digital photo frame you
want the document to look sharp and focused to reflect on the product’s
characteristics. Light blues, light yellows, and your font styles don't
exactly convey that. I think you
should consider using the color white and then contrasting it with darker shades
of red, yellow, blue, and black.
Peer Review
The first aspect of the document that struck me as impressive was the color
scheme. It is very eye catchy and seems to be consistent with the Kodak ads
that I have seen in the past. Some of the document fonts are not the most easy
to read; these fonts give a different feel to the document, almost a colloquial
feel and could maybe contribute something to use preferences. I think that this
document style, while somewhat unsure, of a small pamphlet, leaflet, or
brochure would be appropriate for a customer buying the product or considering
this product versus a competitor.
There was an excellent job done describing what is included with the
purchase for the customer. The technical specifications section was done very
well and this section outlined many of the important requirements for this
product. One can easily tell that there was a lot of research put into this
document.
When looking at the title page, I like the images that are there, but really
feel that this type of product and this project in its display style could use
some sort of catchy slogan. This could really improve the reader response to
the document.
As far as seeing the audience for this document, I don’t see a particular
audience being effectively used but instead to all users or customers of the
product. There is not too much technical information to be had in the document
and could use more or less depending on whom you are trying to target to buy
the product, elderly, children, adults, tech savvy people, novices, etc.
Overall, the team did a nice job preparing their first draft and are on
their way to a great document.
Kyle Dalbec
peer review
Overall the project had a very good layout, reading the reviews flowed nicely. The background was exelent and did not draw too much attention away from the content.
First Draft of the Brochure
First Draft.