You presentation seemed very thorough in addressing important features of dragonfly.  I also like how you show how these features work to create a more interactive website.  I think you organized the content well, the only suggestion I have is that it might not hurt to make the slides slightly less wordy.  There's a lot of info and reading per slide.  Overall the presentation is great!

I had the same problems when trying to load my PowerPower presentation onto the website.  I used screenshots to denote where videos should go, just as you used placeholders.  It looks like your present your content with a purpose.  You look like you want to pursuade your client to use your idea, which is great.  I like how your presentation has a clear introduction, benefits, and conclusion.  This sets apart the content of the PowerPoint clearly.

In the presentation, you do good work with your phrasing to offer engaging and relevant information. The verbs of each bullet are parallel, which increases readability and professionalism significantly. You've also added relevant summary slides if your users/readers don't have time to watch your videos. Starting with the title slide, you want to make sure tha your slides are always persuading like slides 4-9. Add a sub-title to the title. Give an overview of what Dragonfly can do for PARQ. Make your conclusions more client-specific and persuasive. Also, work to vary slide titles so you don't repeat them. And work to revise so content fits on all slides. You could also add your names on the title slide.

In your instructions, I think you've included the relevant text and screenshots to engage your reader and instruct them properly. At the beginning and end, I think you can offer more context and background information that is specific to PARQ. Another place of context and information is in a brief introduction to each section of instructions. In revision, using bold for keywords or software-related text will improve readability. In places, your steps are too long. You can divide those up, or use bullets to show options. You can also use "NOTE:" or "Warning:" to further divide that information and increase readability. Good work with titles and captions in screenshots, and in integrating those into the text.