Overall it is a very nice looking set of instructions.  The main problem with it is that is exceptionally long.  This wouldn't be as big of a problem if there was some way of picking and choosing what you wanted instructions on.  A table of contents with links to what you wanted to be intucted on would be a way to fix that.  Other than it looks very good.

My comments are attached. Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks,

Kevin