Project 2 Proposal Memo
Posted February 29th, 2008 by kingmj
Reposted for correct category, memo attached.
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Peer Review
Proposal Review
I think Photoshop is a great project choice. It is one that most people can use and it is becoming increasingly more popular. I will admit that I know a majority of the programs people are choosing, but photoshop is one that I do not have much experience with. I love the approach you are taking for this project in showing how to incorporate photoshop into the Web 2.0 platform. One suggestion I have for your proposal memo would be to add headings, but as far as the project goes, I can't think of a better way to approach this project within the scope of the project.
Your proposal
This should be a really relevant topic for your peers in the class, and could even be a good reference for Project 3 and beyond. Your focus is chosen well, and already shows a lot of knowledge of the subject. I feel that your subtopics and overall order will benefit your readers and instruct them in your intended way. I look forward to the results. Maintain effective group dynamics so that one group member does not do all the writing or all the editing, etc.--evenly distribute and divide responsibilites.
In the future, be sure to follow memo format more closely. Review pages 232-233 in The Thompson Handbook. You could might also try headings to improve readability. Work on varying sentence beginnings, and use less passive verbs like is, was, are, were.