1. Did your partner use headings in their document?? Headings are an
important part of business writing, and you should being developing
better skills to use them in your own business writing. The Headings are appropriately used to denote different topics.

2. Shorter paragraphs are another important aspect of business
writing. Are their paragraphs 4-8 sentences long?? If not, mark a new
paragraph within the existing paragraph with a comment. The paragraphs are of appropriate length of 4-8 sentences.

3. Active verb choice is another important aspect of business
writing. Underline any good examples of active verbs. Circle any
weaker, passive verbs, like "to be" forms (is, was, are, were) and do,
does, has, have, etc. Action verb choice was used very well and passive verbs were rarely used except when appropriate.

4. Do their sentences have varied beginnings?? This is the easiest
way to achieve sentence variety and complexity. Bracket sentences that
you think can be more varied and complex. The sentences have varied beginnings and do not feel like anything is repeating itself.

5. Finally, review the questions for each aspect of Step 4. Did they
answer each one equally and fully?? Here, mention any that can be
better, more detailed, and more developed. Each question of step 4 is answered fully and equally.