If you're enrolled in ENGL 421Y, Section 03-01 and 04-01 with Kevin McKelvey, you've come to the right place. This website will be our meeting place for the Fall 2007 semester. The site is designed to make your learning experience a valuable one. Students enrolled in this course will meet in this common space to share feedback on their writing, discuss course content, and collaborate on writing projects. As we gear up for the start of the semester, please note the following so that you're prepared and that your experience in the class is a positive one. Read more >>
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English 421Y, "Technical Writing Online"
Kevin McKelvey
Section: 0301 and 0401
(Online) Office Hrs: chats by appt.
Office: Heavilon 325E
Ph: 765.494.1643
Fax: 765.494.3780
E-Mail: kamckelv@purdue.edu
English 421Y helps students become better technical communicators, whose work is characterized by the presentation of technical material in written and visual formats that are user centered and aware of audience and context. The course and its principles are grounded in rhetorical theory and informed by current research in technical communication.
Communication across multiple audiences and for multiple purposes continues to be a desired skill set in technical and professional fields. Beyond field-specific knowledge and experience, successful and ethical communication drives the professional world. This class, in content and form, models these successful communication practices. Working individually and in groups, students learn effective strategies for communicating about and with technology, particularly in networked workplaces and through usability testing. To achieve success in this course, students must display the ability to succeed in their future workplaces by developing a variety of informative and visually effective print and electronic documents.
This course attempts to find a middle space between the daily assignments, F2F discussion, and interaction of an onsite course and the self-pacing student may expect of distance education courses. This course uses three modules to work through each project. Keep in mind that this course is not completely self-paced, but students can work ahead on a several assignments and, ultimately, can have more flexibility and responsibility within the course structure. See below for a more detailed description of the project modules and self-pacing.
The Thomson Handbook (Comprehensive Edition), by David Blakesley and Jeffrey L. Hoogeveen. Boston: Thomson/Wadsworth, 2007. This book is available at local bookstores and may also be purchased online (e.g., through Amazon, here). You can buy the hardcover or paperback versions. This text provides essential information, examples, and principles for effective business writing. We will be reading and discussing chapters from Parts 2 through 7. Other chapters in the book will be useful for reference purposes. You may be interested in watching this short Flash presentation about the book's resources. These are general course goals outlined by the Professional Writing Program. Instructors will articulate how each specific project incorporates the course goals.
Writing in Context
Project Management
Document Design
Make rhetorical design decisions about technical documents including
Teamwork
Learn and apply strategies for successful teamwork, such as
Research
Understand and use the research methods and strategies necessary to the production of professional documents, including
Technology
Use and evaluate the writing technologies frequently used in the workplace, such as emailing, instant messaging, image editing, video editing, presentation design and delivery, HTML editing, Web browsing, content management, and desktop publishing technologies.
This section of 421Y finds the half-way point between the course goals of improving your writing process and collaboration skills while also meeting your expectations as a distance education student. After the first week, our only due dates will be Wednesdays and Fridays for most assignments, and on other days you will be reading, conducting peer review, and working on your projects. Each student should be responsible and flexible in completing each week's work since you have some, but not complete, freedom to pace yourself.
The course is broken down into three modules centered around the course's three major projects. Here are some guidelines to help you understand how self-pacing, peer review, and collaboration will work:
You will be asked to locate a job for which you are qualified and apply for it. Step 1 of the project asks you to learn about and use various web-based resources for job seekers and ultimately to select one job to pursue. Step 2 asks you to prepare the all-important "Job Application Letter." Step 3 asks you to prepare a resume suitable for such a position. In Step 4, you will assess your experience in a "Project Assessment Document." In the process of completing each step, you will work closely with your peers and me to shape your writing so that it represents you and your experience fully and effectively, given the rhetorical circumstances. You will also study and respond to examples from the textbook. (Individual; 20% of course grade.) Weeks 1-6
The focus of Project 2 is a set of illustrated instructions. For this project, you and your partner(s) will create your own original set of instructions with necessary illustrations for an audience of knowledgeable college students. This will be a longer document, 10-15 pages, with 8-10 illustrations or visuals, two of which your group will design. You need at least 25 steps. Other aspects of the project include a proposal memo, a progress report blog, as well as a usability tests, the completed instructions, and an introductory memo.
All group members will keep a project log and submit Collaborative Project Evaluation forms.
(Collaborative: 25% of course grade.) Weeks 7-12
For Project 3, you will work collaboratively in project teams on a client-based service-learning project that teaches you to manage complex writing challenges in real contexts that matter. You will learnn principles of project management, collaboration, document cycling, usability testing and study, and client-based research. Because you will work with real clients--either in the community or online, you will also learn important principles of professional and ethical communication. The goal will be to start with the White Paper Projects produced already this semester and then, after user-testing and usability study, produce a user-guide that teaches a critical and (perhaps) complex application of the technology to an interested client. You will begin the project by thinking of and contacting clients who may benefit from having such your report, which will consist of several components, including a short multmedia, web-based presentation. (Collaborative; 25% of course grade.) Weeks 12-Finals
Much of your writing for this class will be posted publicly on the Internet to your individual weblog or our community weblog home page. Weblog posting assignments will include drafts, project logs, and research notes, among others. See posting to your weblog for more information. The calendar specifies what you should post to your weblog and by when, so let that be your guide.
Although we will have many readings each week, you are responsible for writing one, 300-word blog post. The reading responses will function to synthesize the readings and your reactions to them, much like class discussion. Please refer to guidelines on how to post a reading response.
You are required to post five (5) comments and replies (e.g., follow-up responses) each week to the blog posts (reading and other responses posted by others) appearing on our course's front page. Your comments and replies should be spaced out over at least three days. Each should be, at minimum, 100 words each.
All comments and replies to another's blog post should follow effective rhetorical strategies for networking with others on the Web. (Readings from the course text provide guidelines to follow.)
Our activity online substitutes for in-person discussion in interesting (and sometimes deeper) ways. Of course, you are always welcome, and encouraged, to post beyond thsese minimum requirements. The course calendar includes reminders about meeting this ongoing obligation for participating in class discussion.
The format and focus of your weblog comments and replies is described fully in these Guidelines for Posting Comments and Replies. Please bear in mind that your online interaction is the glue that holds the course together, makes collobaration possible, and helps you achieve the course goals. For these reasons--and because we are not meeting F2F--your engagement in these online discussions will require serious and consistent attention throughout the course. It won't be possible to make up missed postings later since the discussion will have already moved on.
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Employment Project |
20 |
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White Paper Project (collaborative) |
25 |
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Client-Based Service Learning Project (collaborative) |
25 |
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Weblogs, Reading Responses, Project Logs, etc. |
30 |
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Total |
100% |
The three major projects in the course will be comprised of several components, each of which will be worth a percentage of your final grade. For the two collaborative projects, students will complete the required Collaborative Evaluation Form.
All major assignments will be graded on the standard letter-grade scale: A=100-90 B=89-80 C=79-70 D=69-60 F=59 or below.
Students must participate in all of the three major projects and complete a majority of the required weblog posting assignments in order to pass this class.
This portion of your grade will be based on
In order to participate fully in the course, you should already be able to use the technology platform and applications listed below.
Because the exchange of information and documents in this class will be entirely electronic, familiarity with certain technologies is crucial for participation and success in the course. If you need any assistance now or at any point during the semester, please do not hesitate to ask.
During the semester, you'll need daily access to the Internet and email. Because the course home page is the main locus of the class community, you are responsible for reading and keeping current with all weblog postings on the home page, including those submitted by both the instructor and your fellow students. You'll be responsible for configuring your system to access course materials, to read course email and participate in online discussions, and to submit your work. Very early in the semester, you will be asked to demonstrate that you can meet these responsibilities:
If at any time you have problems accessing the Internet from home, you'll need to find a public lab or connection point. Problems with computers will not be an excuse for falling behind or failing to complete required assignments. If your Internet goes down, use another computer. If your computer breaks, use another computer. In other words, find a way to complete the assignments on time. Because computer problems are a fact of life, always work to complete your assignments early and make frequent backups to multiple media.
Collaborative work is a required component of the course. You and your project team members are responsible for updating one another and me about assignment development and progress. In addition, you also are responsible for negotiating together all aspects of your work, including planning, drafting, revising, file managing, and scheduling of assignments. When a collaborative project is assigned, you will receive explicit guidelines for successful collaboration. Individual group members will complete Collaborative Evaluation Forms. For more information about good principles of collaboration, see the brochure, Group Work and Collaborative Writing <http://dhc.ucdavis.edu/vohs/>.
Since this is an online course, your attendance at a physical location is not required. However, you will need to demonstrate active involvement in the course activities by keeping up with reading responses, project logs, and other coursework. You will also need to respond to course email promptly to ensure that good communication flows in all directions. More than one continuous week of absence from course activities is grounds for failure of the class. If you disappear for a few days here, another few days there, and some more later, then your final grade may be lowered, and you will likely see your class participation suffer and your collaboration fail. In addition, if you are frequently "absent" from the online discussions (i.e., you fail to post for several days at a time), your final grade may be lowered.
Purdue students and their instructors are expected to adhere to guidelines set forth by the Dean of Students in "Academic Integrity: A Guide for Students," which students are encouraged to read here:
http://www.purdue.edu/ODOS/services/gradeappeals.htm
The preamble of this guide states the following: "Purdue University values intellectual integrity and the highest standards of academic conduct. To be prepared to meet societal needs as leaders and role models, students must be educated in an ethical learning environment that promotes a high standard of honor in scholastic work. Academic dishonesty undermines institutional integrity and threatens the academic fabric of Purdue University. Dishonesty is not an acceptable avenue to success. It diminishes the quality of a Purdue education, which is valued because of Purdue's high academic standards."
Academic dishonesty is defined as follows: "Purdue prohibits "dishonesty in connection with any University activity. Cheating, plagiarism, or knowingly furnishing false information to the University are examples of dishonesty." [University Regulations, Part V, Section III, B, 2, a] Furthermore, the University Senate has stipulated that "the commitment of acts of cheating, lying, and deceit in any of their diverse forms (such as the use of substitutes for taking examinations, the use of illegal cribs, plagiarism, and copying during examinations) is dishonest and must not be tolerated. Moreover, knowingly to aid and abet, directly or indirectly, other parties in committing dishonest acts is in itself dishonest." [University Senate Document 72-18, December 15, 1972]"
If you have any questions about this policy, please ask.
In the event of a major campus emergency, course requirements, deadlines and grading percentages are subject to changes that may be necessitated by a revised semester calendar or other circumstances. You can acquire updated information from the course website, by emailing me, or by contacting me through the English Department at 765-494-3740.
The instructor will stick closely to the course calendar -- it is important that you keep up. When possible, you may certainly complete assignments early, but you must complete them on time. Much of what you do for this class quickly leads to another assignment. And often, your postings and comments are part of a larger discussion that will not wait for you. It will also be difficult for you to do your part in group projects if you miss assigned deadlines. Thus, the majority of missed class assignments cannot be made up. If a serious and unavoidable problem arises, however, you should contact your instructor by email prior to the deadline to determine whether or not an extension for the work will or will not be granted. Late work will rarely, if ever, be accepted without prior approval.
Follow the links at the bottom of this page for a schedule of assignments for each week this semester. Within each week, you will find daily listings of assignments. Each bullet point for the day is a different task for you to complete. Unless specifically noted otherwise, all assignments are to be completed before class on the day listed.
This course calendar may be updated throughout the semester. I'll notify you about any major changes, but you are still responsible for keeping up with the current schedule.
IMPORTANT: You must visit all of the links provided within the course calendar. There are many links to follow and read. Make sure you visit all of them. Some links provide easy access to other parts of the class site which will help you in your assignments. Some links are to required readings. Others provide you with detailed instructions on completing the assignments. Eventually, you may come to know the instructions which supplement assignments that are repeated throughout the course, but it's still a good idea to continue to revisit the instructions to make sure that you are satisfying all of the requirements.
By Monday, January 7, at midnight
By Wednesday, January 9, at midnight
By Friday, January 11, at midnight
Reading
Check out Week 2. No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, January 14 at midnight
Reading
By Wednesday, January 16 at midnight.
Peer Review
No peer review this week. We will begin peer reviews with the Job Ad Analysis in Week 3 , and continue with peer reviews throughout the semester.
Reading
Reading Response
By Friday, January 18 at midnight
Employment Project
Reading
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
Check out Week 3 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
Monday, January 21 is Martin Luther King, Jr. Day
By Wednesday, January 23 at midnight
Activity
Using the resources listed on page 222 of The Thomson Handbook ("Using Print, Campus and Internet Resources"), find two job ads, produce an exact copy of each, then select one that you would apply for. Put the ads in a blog post (use cut-and-paste; provide a URL also if the ad has complex components that don't copy well). In a new blog post (tag=Employment Project Step 1 Drafts), complete the Job Ad Analysis form. Copy the questions into your blog post and then answer them.
Reading
Reading Response
Post a reading response by Wednesday at midnight. Suggested Prompts: You might also describe one instance when you sent an email message that worked wonders or that proved to be a huge mistake. What happened? Why? Which of the "Ten Habits of Successful Emailers" seemed to be missing? How does emailing differ from text messaging, and why do you think email is used more frequently in business and industry for project management? How might Gareth's tips apply to emailing?
By Friday, January 25 at midnight
Peer Review
Write two responses to job ads and analyses posted to your peers' blogs. Respond only to posts that have no or at most one response. What aspects of the job seem most important to you? Which criteria will be hardest to meet? Does it sound like a good job to you?
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
Check out Week 4 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
Reading
By Wednesday, January 30 at midnight
Reading Response
By Friday, February 1 at midnight
Step 2 of the Employment Project: Post a draft of your job application letter to your blog by today. Your letter should be attached to a blog post that includes a cover note that follows guidelines for Eliciting Good Response and the PDF version of the letter. (Read these directions for converting your documents to PDF format if you have any questions about the process.) Use the tag "Job Application letter." Review the sample in The Thomson Handbook, p 225. Your letter should be context-specific and should contain the required five parts (heading, greeting, opening, persuasion, closing) in the format shown.
Peer Review
As cover letter drafts are posted, complete your Peer Review of Job Application Letters using these directions. You will need to complete two reviews.
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. You need five (5) for this week.
Check out Week 5 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, email the instructor.
By Monday, February 4 at midnight
Reading
Employment Project
Continue drafting your resume. Your printable resume (one or more pages in length, depending upon the type of job and the depth of your experience) should adapt features drawn from The Thomson Handbook and from those available for review at the Online Writing Lab. It's critical that you shape your resume to the specific job or internship you have chosen to apply for (that it's suited to the context), so be sure to include only the relevant aspects of your professional experience. As in the Job Application Letter, your writing needs to be error-free, concise, and presented in an easily readable format.
Wednesday, February 6, by midnight.
Employment Project
Post your resume draft to your blog as a PDF attachment to a blog message that explains the nature of the attachment and invites peer feedback. Read these directions for converting your documents to PDF format if you have any questions about the process. You should also review the principles, guidelines, and resume samples in The Thomson Handbook (Chapter 12, pages 226-232). Pay special attention to the Project Checklist "Evaluating Your Resume's Content" and "Evaluating Your Resume's Design" on pages 228-229. Ask yourself these questions as you prepare your final draft.
Reading ResponseFriday, February 8, by midnight.
Peer Review
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. You need five (5) for this week.
Check out Week 6. No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, email the instructor.
By Monday, February 11 at midnight
Submit Draft of Employment Project Project Assessment (Step 4)
Readings on Metacognitive Writing
By Wednesday, February 13 at midnight
Reading Response
Consider the role of metacognitive writing in previous
writing experiences and to this class's focus on the writing process.
Next, consider the importance of feedback and response in relation to
metacognitive writing. Also, how can freewriting help with
metacognitive writing?? Procrastination is already a topic in some of
the comment threads, so this response can end with a synthesis of how
metacognitive writing and feedback relate to procrastination.
Peer Review
Complete one Peer Review of Project Assessment document using these guidelines.
By Friday, February 15 at midnight
Be sure to begin completing Employment Project Posting Checklist, which is due on Monday, February 18. See Kevin's blog post on the checklist here.
Step 4: Project Assessment Document due: Submit a two-page overview and analysis of your deliverables and the process you used to complete them. Your Project Assessment Document should answer the questions in Step 4 of the Employment Project, each of which is tied to the major goals of the assignment.
Employment Project Due
By tonight at midnight, you should post ONE (1) pdf file that contains your final cover letter, resume and project assessment to the blog. Your cover note should include links to your Step 1 documents as well. Read these directions for converting your documents to PDF format if you have any questions about the process.
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. You need five (5) for this week.
Check out Week 7. No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, email the instructor.
By Monday, February 18 at midnight
Reading
By Wednesday, February 20 at midnight
Reading
Reading Response
In the readings on Web 2.0, follow some links in the articles to learn more about Web 2.0 softwares. With this basic research and knowledge, write about half of your response in regards to these programs and your experiences with them. (If you can't think of any, this website is Web 2.0). You can also mention any other softwares you've used or experienced that are Web 2.0. In the second half of your response, offer some ideas about what you'd like to write about for the Illustrated Instructions project. Also give some background on your software knowledge and experiences. I'll use this response to put the class into groups of two for the project.
By Friday, February 22 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. You need five (5) for this week.
Check out Week 8. No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, email the instructor.
By Monday, February 25 at midnight
Project Two
Continue generating ideas for your project.
Sign up for chat conference with Kevin. Times available on Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday.
By Wednesday, February 27 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
Reading Response
In your reading response, synthesize the readings we've had so far on group work. Write about how these readings have changed your views on group. Write about previous group work experiences. In the last part, define what roles you'll fill in the Project Two.
By Friday, February 29 at midnight
Peer Review
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, March 3 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
Peer Review
By Wednesday, March 5 at midnight
Reading
Project Two
By Friday, March 7 at midnight
Reading
Reading Response
For this reading response, write about your past experiences with instructions and the value of effective visual content. Then, use our readings as a reference point in genereating your own ideas on effective visual content. Finally, end your reading response with a brief list of visual content that you'll need for your illustrated instructions.
Peer Review
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
Spring Break
By Monday, March 17 at midnight
Reading
Project Two
By Wednesday, March 19 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
Reading Response
By Friday, March 21 at midnight
Usability Test
Project Two
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, March 24 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
By Wednesday, March 26 at midnight
Project Three
Project Two
By Friday, March 28 at midnight
Project Two
Reading
Reading Response
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By March 31, at midnight
Project Three
Project Two
Reading
By Wednesday, April 2, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
Reading Response
By Friday, April 4, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, April 7, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
By Wednesday, April 9, at midnight
Reading
Reading Response
Peer Review
By Friday, April 11, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, April 14, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
Peer Review
By Wednesday, April 16, at midnight
Reading Response
Project Three
Peer Review
By Friday, April 18, at midnight
Project Three
Reading
Project Log
Continue posting comments and replies using Principles for Comments and Replies. Please follow the guidelines for effective blog responding as discussed in this chapter. You need five (5) for this week, so respond to reading posts that have been promoted to our front page. For reference on how to do this, review How to Post Comments and Replies. Your posts should adhere to the guidelines for networking in online forums listed in the Project Checklist (TH, page 627).
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, April 21, at midnight
Project Three
Peer Review
By Wednesday, April 23, at midnight
Reading Response
Project Three
By Friday, April 25, at midnight
Project Three
Peer Review
Project Log
No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Wednesday, April 30, at midnight
Project Three
This section of the course syllabus contains additional guidelines for completing assignments and support materials for using this site.
Some of you may be in search of an avatar or image to use in the profile that you created for yourself when you registered. If so, here are some suggestions:
An avatar is just an image that "stands-in" for your picture and can be an object, artwork, a photo, or something else that might convey some aspect of your identity, personality, or interests. So, for example, someone interested in biking might use an image of a bike as an avatar rather than a personal picture. The image works best if it's in jpg, gif, or png format, and the dimensions should be (about) 85x85 so that it displays correctly (and doesn't get squished when displayed, for example).
To find an existing avatar to use for free, you could look at a site like these. If you have a Yahoo! ID (free to get, if not), you can get some nice ones:
or try
You could also take an existing image of yourself and then create a picture by cropping out the part you don't want. If you haven't used an image editing program before, that can be a bit tricky. But if you have, just use the crop tool to draw a box around the part of the image you want to use, crop it, and then resize it so that it's about 85x85 pixels.
If you have a larger photo and would like help to make it into an avatar, send it to your instructor as an email attachment. Your instructor can help you from there.
Peer Job Application Letter Response
In composing your response, you might find it easier to first just
to go through and address all the questions on a sheet of paper or in a
document file. Your tone should be informal but professional and not
overly casual. A friendly voice in feedback is good; many writer's are
more comfortable at accepting cricitism of their work when it come from
a good-natured, sympathetic responder.
Also, when talking about specific areas of the author's text, be
sure to include specific quotation within your feedback. Take advantage
of the fact that you can easily copy and paste to point directly to
what you are referring to from the draft. (Try using Firefox or
Safari's "tabbed browsing" to keep multiple windows easily available
during this type of peer review.).
Form and Style
Content/Rhetorical Context
For this class, you'll have to learn at least one HTML tag, the one for making hyperlinks.
It's easy to learn. Check it out:

Your link will now show up in your test.
Here is how you make links in traditional HTML coding. Still easy, but it doesn't show up with our rich-text settings and input format.
<a href=""></a>
is the tag itself without any information in it. Within the quotes, you'll put the url, or web address, for the site which you want to link to. In between the ><, you'll put the text you want displayed on the screen.
For example, the url for slashdot is http://slashdot.org/. And if you want to make the word Slashdot a link in a sentence to the website in a blog post, type in,
<a href="http://slashdot.org/">Slashdot</a> is a well known community blog site.
To get
Slashdot is a well known community blog site.
HTML is picky and it's easy to make a careless mistake. Don't include any extra spaces in the HTML tag. Make sure that you include "http://" as a part of your web address. In fact, one of the easiest ways to make sure that you get the URL correct is to copy and paste it from the address bar of a browser window currently displaying the page.
See? Not too difficult. But there's one more thing . . . .
Avoid merely posting the URL as a link:
Notice how this doesn't convey much information. Better to have put the page title (often found either on the page or in the window bar at the top) or link to part of your text (think of the examples in this site). At the same time, really long URL's won't word wrap at the end of a line. They may cause problems with the way that text is displayed on web pages.
For review, check out Chapter 30 in The Thomson Handbook, "The Basics of HTML Coding" (p. 664).
Portable Document Format (PDF) is a file format created by Adobe Acrobat and useful for sharing printer ready versions of documents. Unlike when files are shared between different productivity applications (i.e., word processing, spreadsheet) or different versions of the same productivity software, the same layout and typographic styles are maintained regardless of the computer environment. What the author sees when creating a PDF is exactly what the receiver of the file sees and can print out on their computer. Consequently, PDFs are particularly useful for sending resumes, cover letters, and other business documents where layout and presentation is critica. Writers want all of the effort they put into formatting professional-looking documents to be maintained.
PDFs are typically viewed using Adobe Reader (which is free to download). However, Adobe Reader will not produce PDFs. As you will soon be submitting drafts of cover letters, resumes, and other documents in PDF format, make sure that you can successfully generate a PDF using one of the following means:
Imagine the following scenario:
You have a great idea for a project for your department at work. Because it will require significant resources and funding, the senior manager in your department has asked you to prepare a ten-page proposal.
After working on the proposal for a while, the senior manager sends you an email requesting to see your draft in progress. The proposal is far from complete, but you fire off a reply saying "Here is my working draft," and attach it. The next day, you receive another email from the senior manager full of feedback which you are obligated to take. However, the feedback asks you to revise your proposal in new directions, quite contrary to what you had planned, effectively taking over the direction of the proposal. You now have to discard many good ideas you had for development. Those sections where you knew you needed the most help--they were not addressed at all.
This happens all the time in getting response to our writing. We get proofreading corrections when we need ideas; we get heavy revision suggestions when the draft needs to be proofread to meet a deadline.
To elicit useful and focused responses from readers (during peer review, for example), we must solicit good response. In the above scenario, if the writer had explained to the senior manager where she needed help in the draft and what her plans were for further development, it's quite possible that the feedback would have been more focused and helpful. So when asking for feedback on a document, explain to the responder
Once you've defined your needs, your reviewer is more likely to shape their feedback effectively for you. As a reviewer, it's much easier to address the writer's concerns than to try to guess what might or might not be useful to the writer.

Posting comments, as you will soon see, is easier than creating and sending an email.
If you don't see an add new comment link, you are most likely not logged in.
Note: You can use the Comment viewing options to change the way that comments are displayed on the page. Experiment with this feature and see which configuration works best for you.
Posting to your individual weblog is a little more complex than posting a comment, but after a couple of times, you'll find it as easy as email.
Notes:
For the first day of class, you'll want to explore some of the features of the site. This document gives an overview of a few features you might want to take a look at that will help you to navigate the site.
In the header visible at the top of every page, you'll find one row of links:

Once you've logged in to the site, directly beneath the header on the left, you'll find the main navigation block, accessible from every page:
The navigation block is your gateway to many areas of the site useful for creating and viewing content and managing your work. For example,
All of our course materials on the site are integrated into the course guide:
The course guide is a hypertext with many levels of pages.
Peer Resume Response
In composing your response, you might find it easier to first just to go through and address all the questions on a sheet of paper or in a document file. Your tone should be informal but professional and not overly casual. A friendly voice in feedback is good; many writer's are
more comfortable at accepting cricitism of their work when it come from a good-natured, sympathetic responder.
Also, when talking about specific areas of the author's text, be sure to include specific quotation within your feedback. Take advantage of the fact that you can easily copy and paste to point directly to what you are referring to from the draft. (Try using Firefox or Safari's "tabbed browsing" to keep multiple windows easily available during this type of peer review.).
Questions for Response
Because there will be no face-to-face meetings in this class, posting comments and replies to the reading responses and drafts of others will be the primary means of class interaction and discussion. Each time there is a reading response, the instructor will promote at least two blog posts to the front page of the course website. There, everyone will respond to and discuss the readings, drafts, or other work posted to our course website. The course description explains the purpose of this coursework:
You are required to post five (5) comments and replies (e.g., follow-up responses) each week to the blog posts (reading and other responses posted by others) appearing on our course's front page. Your comments and replies should be spaced out over at least three days. Each should be, at minimum, 100 words each.
All comments and replies to another's blog post should follow effective rhetorical strategies for networking with others on the Web. (Readings from the course text provide guidelines to follow.)
- Keep threads alive and relevant.
- Follow-up comments with further discussion.
- Think of your comments and replies as part of a lively class discussion in which everyone participates.
Our activity online substitutes for in-person discussion in interesting (and sometimes deeper) ways. Of course, you are always welcome, and encouraged, to post beyond thsese minimum requirements. The course calendar includes reminders about meeting this ongoing obligation for participating in class discussion.
When commenting and replying to blog posts on the course's front page, you are required to
You should also
For those of you wishing to do more than the minimum requirements of the course, you might visit the class website additional times per week and post new comments and/or replies to any of the blog posts.
You'll do a lot of the writing for this class in your individual weblog space on the course website. You can access your weblog via your my account page.
One way to think of a weblog or blog is as a journal. However, unlike a journal that you might keep at home (as well as most if not all of the writing you have done in school before), your blog space is public. Your fellow class members will be invited to read your blog. Classmates will respond to your posts with comments and replies. Group members will review notes you take when doing research. And, of course, since it's on the Internet, other Web readers may encounter your writing and take a look at what you have to say.
There are many uses for weblogs, but we'll only use them for a few things here. During this class, you'll be asked to use your course weblog to
In addition to the individual weblog space that everyone has, the home page of our course website is a community blog space where anyone can post. While most of your blog writing will be posted to your individual weblog, we'll use the home page as a place to promote discussion among all class members. For example,
Good Blogging Practices
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Each week, you will be responsible for creating a reading response. Each reading response should be specifically focused on the reading and the prompt provided on the calendar, clearly indicate that you have read and thought seriously about the reading, and be sufficiently developed. Reading responses should be 300 words or longer. Post your reading response with the "reading response" content type.
Sometimes, you and each of your group members will be assigned to post your reading response to the course home page by submitting a story. The posts on the course home page will then be the focus of full class discussion. Selected reading responses will also be promoted to the front page for more lively community discussion.
In composing your reading response you should:
Find one of your peer's drafts of Step 4: Project Assessment
Document (Employment Project Assessment Document Draft). Download it,
and use the questions below to review the drafts. You can make comments
directly on the drafts (using comments on Microsoft Word, Adobe Reader
or Acrobat) and you can answer the questions by using the "add new
comment" function on their blog post. Be sure that you attach their
updated file to their blog post. Please refer to the guidelines in Step
4 of the Employment Project.
1. Did your partner use headings in their document?? Headings are an
important part of business writing, and you should being developing
better skills to use them in your own business writing.
2. Shorter paragraphs are another important aspect of business
writing. Are their paragraphs 4-8 sentences long?? If not, mark a new
paragraph within the existing paragraph with a comment.
3. Active verb choice is another important aspect of business
writing. Underline any good examples of active verbs. Circle any
weaker, passive verbs, like "to be" forms (is, was, are, were) and do,
does, has, have, etc.
4. Do their sentences have varied beginnings?? This is the easiest
way to achieve sentence variety and complexity. Bracket sentences that
you think can be more varied and complex.
5. Finally, review the questions for each aspect of Step 4. Did they
answer each one equally and fully?? Here, mention any that can be
better, more detailed, and more developed.
During Projects 2 & 3, you are required to keep a weekly project log and post it to your weblog on the course site.
Because you will have a weekly record at the end of the project, your project log will help you to complete the Peer Collaboration Evaluation Form due at the end of each project. Project logs also provide evidence of each group member's contribution to the project. And detailed project logs lend more credibility to your evaluation of others in your Peer Collaboration Evaluation Form.
After college, you may find keeping a project log useful in your professional career:
At least once a week during projects 2 and 3, post a short report to your weblog covering all of the following:
Remember. Your project logs are public and can be read by other group members. Be diplomatic. Do not write about what other group