English 420, Business Writing

Make sure to print the handout before the presentation on Monday

On Wednesday we worked on our service learning project memo. We chose three company that we are interested in. We will later chose one organization and contact them to see if they will be our potential client. On Sunday we met at Hecks library to finish up our group presentions for monday.

The week before spring break we met and worked on putting together our rough draft. I have spent a little bit of time just looking at my section of the paper and thinking about what I can do to cut out some of my information. I realize that I have included more than my share so I am selecting some things that can be cut down or even out all together.

Hey group didn't do any work this last week. I did enjoy my spring break and I am well rested and ready to make corrections on the paper. We should meet on Tuesday or Thursday of this week.

The week before spring break we broke our group up into two different teams. One team covering Carpal Tunnel Syndrome and the other covering the lack of management. As apart of the team covering the section on Carpal Tunnel, we further broke our section into two different aspects, prevention and treatment. We explained in detail two different methods that knight corporation could use to help prevent future cases of CTS, as well as several different treatment options for those employees who currently suffer from Carpal Tunnel Syndrome.

Our group presentation seems to go pretty well last Monday. I feel like we did a fine job on explaining all the different features that Photoshop has to offer. On Thursday before spring break, the group all met at the library in Hicks to finish our rough draft. We all brought our parts of the paper and then edit each other parts and combine it into one final rough draft.

Here our original rough draft

Outline in the Attachment

This weekend we finished up the loose ends on our technology presentation. Some of our group member were not at Purdue this weekend, so we did some individual work. I personally worked on an outline for the section of the white paper that Tim and I will be doing. We are going to meet more this week to finish up the outline and get the rough draft started. I think that we are moving in a good direction and are on schedule.

This week i have been working on more in depth research on treatment of carpal tunnel syndrome and with that i have created an outline to begin writing my segment of our white paper on. I plan to break down several options and give the pros and cons on each. This way the management can see and understand all the options for ways to handle this problem of theirs.