English 420, Business Writing

This week, our group worked very hard on our white paper. At the start of this week, we meet in Grisom to work on getting everything organized. During this meeting, we were able to come up with our introduction as well as make changes to stuff we had previously written. The changes we made were to give more support to the ideas that we had presented throughout our draft. For example, I wrote about using cars.com. In the rough draft, I mentioned cars.com and posted a screenshot of their website. So, on Monday, I wrote supporting statements as to why cars.com was so important. On Wednesday, our group met again, and we worked on the layout of our paper. Before this meeting, each person in our group had their paper arranged differently. So, we decided to add some titles to our sections and then put pictures at the end of each section. The next day, we all finalized our parts and finished our paper.

Overall, the white paper was something I feel I could have done without. I do see the point in learning how to do these white papers, but I believe that the writting that we are doing should be based on something that actually exist. If we were to be writting about something that was real, I believe I may have given more effort to this project, although the amount of effort I puit in this project was pretty expansive.