Final Work Blog

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This past week was hectic trying to get our presentation together, our final draft, making a proposal for the service learning project and trying to get in contact with the executive director of the YWCA. On Monday, we presented our solutions to the class and the "Board of Directors." They asked many good questions which we tried to incorporate as much as possible into our final draft.

This week we also revised our rough draft. To complete this, we took the comments into consideration and each revised our own sections of the paper. We also finally got the graphs to fit on a page so that there wasn't a lot of white space. My feelings about this paper are pretty good, and I think we did a good job on finding information and writing it out so that it was easy to understand. I'm definitely glad this project is over though!


Submitted by chelfric on Sat, 03/29/2008 - 12:49. categories [ ]
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Submitted by anders51 on Sun, 03/30/2008 - 15:12.

I agree I believe we did a good job incorporating the feedback we got on our rough draft into our final. Using double spaces in between paragraphs also helped use up the white space. Our final is now very appealing to the eye. I also strongly agree that I am glad this project is over!