English 420, Business Writing

This past week, our group got a good deal accomplished for the project. We got our contract signed, and the owner at Hungry's was all for everything we pledged to do for him, and as of right now we are all working towards completing those tasks. We broke the project down and gave each member somewhat equal duties. Tae is in charge of learning how to advertise within the residence halls. Steve is in charge of learning how to advertise on campus in general as well as advertising in our new student orientation program, Boiler Gold Rush.

I have attached the contract I drew up

Our team spent the majority of this week both finalizing our White Paper and preparing a proposal for our Service Learning Project. We have decided that we are going to try to work with Hungry's, a newly opened restaurant in the Purdue West shopping center. The manager at Hungry's seemed very happy to work with us, and that gave us confidence that we could develop a good working relationship with their organization. We are meeting today (Sunday,) with the intentions on finishing our White Paper as well as drawing up a contract to sign with the management at Hungry's.

I have attached my revised white paper

This week, we were introduced to the Service Learning Project. We all brought some ideas together and came up with the Memo that was to be turned in on Friday. Fortunately, we already have a good idea who we want to work with. Early in the week, Tae went over and talked to the one who is in charge of Hungries, a new Chicago Style restaurant out at Purdue West. The manager has stated that he is willing to work with us so we feel that this is the route we will take.

Our group spent the week before spring break working on composing the actually white paper in order to turn it in on the friday before spring break. We split the paper into four parts, Steve took the introduction and our first point, Tae took the conclusion and Matt and I took the other two. I wrote my section focusing on improving the workers we already have. I discussed seminars, workshops, and benefits to improve the work. I am trying to come up with a few ways to illustrate what I was saying as well.

let me preface this by saying this was the hardest writing assignment I have ever completed. I only had two sources because I did not know if I needed to site the ideas we had about performance evaluations. It needs a lot of work, but this is what I came up with.

let me preface this by saying this was the hardest writing assignment I have ever completed. I only had two sources because I did not know if I needed to site the ideas we had about performance evaluations. It needs a lot of work, but this is what I came up with.

im gonna link all my sources here, just so we have them, I will be linking them as I add them into my paper so don't be surprised if only one or two are linked so far.

http://www.prlog.org/10046352-apics-toledo-sponsors-leadership-improveme...
http://www.hfma.org/events/conferences/seattle.htm?panel=2

This week we spent some time preparing for our technology presentation. It was postponed until Monday, and I have been devoting some of my attention to that. Also this week, we drew up and outline and met with Mark to discuss what we need to do. From our meetings, we decided that my part in the project would be the third section.