I think that this reading was very helpful. I always have hard time to write long paragraphs. I try to write clearly to show what I want to say, but it doesn't turn out well. I knew that I have to fix it but never really knew what is wrong with my writing. This reading gives me the idea. I didn't know about paragraph breaks, and didn't know why this is important until I read this reading. also, now I am thinking that maybe I used too many unnecessary details
so that made readers bored. Honestly, I still think that writing long paragraph is very difficult for me, but at least I now have some idea how to write paragraphs better.