The reading this time, I personally find it to be very useful. Actually it seems almost funny how this reading seems to have targeted almost all of my weaknesses in writing paragraphs. I had always had trouble with writing long paragraphs, including unnecessary details, and making wordy sentences. This reading pointed out the importance of paragraph breaks in providing the readers a break in reading and allowing they to stop and think throughout the readings. It pointed out that unnecessary details tend to bore the readers when the details are repetitive or if the readers are already aware of them.