This week we finished our rough draft. We all completed sections of the paper. Michael went through everything and worked on the design and fixed any errors. I am sure there are still many improvements for us to make. We'll work on that next week after getting peer reviews back.
The rough draft of our White Paper is complete! However, there are still a few improvements we can make before the due date next Friday. I would like to change the way certain parts of the White Paper are written, and I am sure that there are still grammatical errors somewhere within the paper awaiting correction. Also, the format is acceptable, but I’d like to see it tweaked and given more of a “professional” flair.
Note to self: Buy one jar of patience and apply twice daily! I have finally met my match with one of my group members and totally love him! I never thought there could be someone as difficult to work with as myself and yet here he is. The problem is, he is totally right and I back him 100%.
The status of our project is definitely draft material and hopefully fresh eyes will offer even further insight for improvement.
This week was a whirlwind of activity. It all started last Friday, We had to rethink our entire stance, as I found a source that really threw a kink in our original plan. This caused us all to have to bump back all our due dates, and made this week really hard to get everything done in. We had to research, and a lot of the new research had to come through interviews, which was really hard to gather with such short notice, then we had to write the parts of the paper. This posed a challenge, as everyone was sort of lost as to how we were going to approach the new topic.