I thought that Gar's tips on suck-less writing was very interesting and could be very useful for my future writing. I found his tip on not being redundant was interesting because I sometimes even find myself doing this in my writing. He also mentioned using a different word for the specific device you are writing about would be a good idea. Another tip that I found useful was reading your work out loud to find errors. Overall, I thought that this article was very useful and interesting. He kept his writing carefree leaving the reader to not suffer from boredom.