If you're enrolled in ENGL 421Y, Section 01-01 or 02-01, with Tracy Clark, you've come to the right place. This website will be our meeting place for the Spring 2008 semester. The site is designed to make your learning experience a valuable one. Students enrolled in this course will meet in this common space to share feedback on their writing, discuss course content, and collaborate on writing projects. As we gear up for the start of the semester, please note the following so that you're prepared and that your experience in the class is a positive one. Read more >>
If at any time you have questions about the course, please let me know, via the contact form on the course site or by email.
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Registering for the course website
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Editing your account for the first time
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The following steps ask you to complete information for your profile. This will enable the instructor and fellow students to learn a little more about you and help the instructor tailor this class to your background and goals, as well as arrange collaborative projects.

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English 421Y, "Technical Writing Online"
Instructor Name: Tracy Clark
Sections: 01-01 and 02-01
(Online) Office Hrs: I check e-mail several times a day.
Office: Heavilon 404
Ph: 765.496.1650
Fax: 765.494.3780
E-Mail: clark9@purdue.edu
English 421 helps students become better technical communicators, whose work is characterized by the presentation of technical material in written and visual formats that are user centered and aware of audience and context. The course and its principles are grounded in rhetorical theory and informed by current research in technical communication.
Communication across multiple audiences and for multiple purposes continues to be a desired skill set in technical and professional fields. Beyond field-specific knowledge and experience, successful and ethical communication drives the professional world. This class, in content and form, models these successful communication practices. Working individually and in groups, students learn effective strategies for communicating about and with technology, particularly in networked workplaces and through usability testing. To achieve success in this course, students must display the ability to succeed in their future workplaces by developing a variety of informative and visually effective print and electronic documents.
This course attempts to find a middle space between the daily assignments, F2F discussion, and interaction of an onsite course and the self-pacing student may expect of distance education courses. This course uses three modules to work through each project. Keep in mind that this course is not completely self-paced, but students can work ahead on a several assignments and, ultimately, can have more flexibility and responsibility within the course structure. See below for a more detailed description of the project modules and self-pacing.
These are general course goals outlined by the Professional Writing Program. Instructors will articulate how each specific project incorporates the course goals.
Writing in Context
Project Management
Document Design
Make rhetorical design decisions about technical documents including
Teamwork
Learn and apply strategies for successful teamwork, such as
Research
Understand and use the research methods and strategies necessary to the production of professional documents, including
Technology
Use and evaluate the writing technologies frequently used in the workplace, such as emailing, instant messaging, image editing, video editing, presentation design and delivery, HTML editing, Web browsing, content management, and desktop publishing technologies.
This section of 421Y finds the half-way point between the course goals of improving your writing process and collaboration skills while also meeting your expectations as a distance education student. After the first week, our only due dates will be Wednesdays and Fridays for most assignments, and on other days you will be reading, conducting peer review, and working on your projects. Each student should be responsible and flexible in completing each week's work since you have some, but not complete, freedom to pace yourself.
The course is broken down into three modules centered around the course's three major projects. Here are some guidelines to help you understand how self-pacing, peer review, and collaboration will work:
For this first major project, you will produce a document containing written and visual instructions for completing a specific task, using a specific software program -- otherwise known as software documentation. Software programs to be covered will be selected through a random drawing; each program assigned is included in the ITaP suite, so you'll have an opportunity to work with the program outside of class time. Besides the actual documentation, you will also produce document specifications; these will describe in detail your proposed documentation and its representative characteristics: target audience, user level, steps and visuals, and the type of document used to convey this information (flyer, brochure, booklet, website, etc.). Another important component of the Quick Guide Project is usability testing, during which at least one classmate will read through your documentation and then actually complete the process under conditions similar to those that your target audience will encounter. Before the usability testing session, you'll need to interview your tester(s) to determine their familiarity with the process you've documented, and then produce a testing "script," in order to facilitate the testing process and anticipate possible "issues" or "irregularities" that testers might encounter). Following the usability testing session, you'll need to produce a brief report in which you discuss observations you've made during testing, as well as discuss testing results. (Individual; 25% of course grade.)
The focus of Project 2 is the white paper, a common report genre in the professional world. White papers are used in business, industrial, and governmental contexts to sum up the gist of what’s known about a subject. During this project you will learn about
All group members will keep a project log and submit Collaborative Project Evaluation forms.
(Collaborative: 25% of course grade.)
For Project 3, you will work in groups of 3 or 4 to produce a technical marketing document for technology-based products. This project consists of two stages: planning and production. As was the case for the White Paper Project, credibility is essential. This project will feature the added dimension of creativity, or techne, in presentation of technically-oriented information. We'll work with document templates within either Adobe InDesign CS2 or Microsoft Publisher -- that way, you'll gain experience with professional-looking documents without spending a lot of time and energy learning an entire program!
Each student will keep a weekly project log in his or her individual blog. You will be asked to email the instructor a collaborative evaluation form after you've submitted the final version of Project 3.(Collaborative; 25% of course grade.)
Much of your writing for this class will be posted publicly on the Internet to your individual weblog or our community weblog home page. Weblog posting assignments will include drafts, project logs, and research notes, among others. See posting to your weblog for more information. The calendar specifies what you should post to your weblog and by when, so let that be your guide.
We will have many readings each week, and you are responsible for writing one, 250-word blog post. The reading responses will function to synthesize the readings and your reactions to them, much like class discussion. Please refer to guidelines on how to post a reading response. NOTE: Generally, you won't have to cover all assigned readings within one blog post; more likely, your posts will focus on specific issues from specific readings.
In addition to posting an individual blog once a week, you are required to post five (5) comments and replies (e.g., follow-up responses) each week to the blog posts (reading and other responses posted by others) appearing on our course's front page. Keep in mind that individual blog posts, and the comments and replies that ensue, will replace the sort of class discussion you would see in an on-site setting. Your comments and replies should be spaced out over at least three days -- again, to replicate class discussion as much as possible. Each should be, at minimum, 100 words each.
All comments on classmates' blog posts, as well as replies to classmates' comments on your blog posts, should follow effective rhetorical strategies for networking with others on the Web. (Readings from the course text provide guidelines to follow.)
Our activity online substitutes for in-person discussion in interesting (and sometimes deeper) ways. Of course, you are always welcome, and encouraged, to post beyond thsese minimum requirements. The course calendar includes reminders about meeting this ongoing obligation for participating in class discussion.
The format and focus of your weblog comments and replies is described fully in these Guidelines for Posting Comments and Replies. Please bear in mind that your online interaction is the glue that holds the course together, makes collobaration possible, and helps you achieve the course goals. For these reasons--and because we are not meeting F2F--your engagement in these online discussions will require serious and consistent attention throughout the course. It won't be possible to make up missed postings later since the discussion will have already moved on.
Grading
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Quick Guide Project |
25 |
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White Paper Project (collaborative) |
25 |
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Technical Marketing Materials Project (collaborative) |
25 |
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Weblogs, Reading Responses, Project Logs, etc. |
25 |
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Total |
100% |
The three major projects in the course will be comprised of several components, each of which will be worth a percentage of your final grade. For the two collaborative projects, students will complete the required Collaborative Evaluation Form.
All major assignments will be graded on the standard letter-grade scale: A=100-90 B=89-80 C=79-70 D=69-60 F=59 or below.
Students must participate in all of the three major projects and complete a majority of the required weblog posting assignments in order to pass this class.
This portion of your grade will be based on
Revisions
You will have an opportunity to revise the first two major projects twice, and the final project once, subject to the following guidelines:
In order to participate fully in the course, you should already be able to use the technology platform and applications listed below.
Because the exchange of information and documents in this class will be entirely electronic, familiarity with certain technologies is crucial for participation and success in the course. If you need any assistance now or at any point during the semester, please do not hesitate to ask.
During the semester, you'll need daily access to the Internet and email. Because the course home page is the main locus of the class community, you are responsible for reading and keeping current with all weblog postings on the home page, including those submitted by both the instructor and your fellow students. You'll be responsible for configuring your system to access course materials, to read course email and participate in online discussions, and to submit your work. Very early in the semester, you will be asked to demonstrate that you can meet these responsibilities:
If at any time you have problems accessing the Internet from home, you'll need to find a public lab or connection point. Problems with computers will not be an excuse for falling behind or failing to complete required assignments. If your Internet goes down, use another computer. If your computer breaks, use another computer. In other words, find a way to complete the assignments on time. Because computer problems are a fact of life, always work to complete your assignments early and make frequent backups to multiple media.
Collaborative work is a required component of the course. You and your project team members are responsible for updating one another and me about assignment development and progress. In addition, you also are responsible for negotiating together all aspects of your work, including planning, drafting, revising, file managing, and scheduling of assignments. When a collaborative project is assigned, you will receive explicit guidelines for successful collaboration. Individual group members will complete collaborative evaluation forms. For more information about good principles of collaboration, see the brochure, Group Work and Collaborative Writing <http://dhc.ucdavis.edu/vohs/>.
Since this is an online course, your attendance at a physical location is not required. However, you will need to demonstrate active involvement in the course activities by keeping up with reading responses, project logs, and other coursework. You will also need to respond to course email promptly to ensure that good communication flows in all directions. More than one continuous week of absence from course activities is grounds for failure of the class. If you disappear for a few days here, another few days there, and some more later, then your final grade may be lowered, and you will likely see your class participation suffer and your collaboration fail. In addition, if you are frequently "absent" from the online discussions (i.e., you fail to post for several days at a time), your final grade may be lowered.
Purdue students and their instructors are expected to adhere to guidelines set forth by the Dean of Students in "Academic Integrity: A Guide for Students," which students are encouraged to read here:
http://www.purdue.edu/ODOS/services/gradeappeals.htm
The preamble of this guide states the following: "Purdue University values intellectual integrity and the highest standards of academic conduct. To be prepared to meet societal needs as leaders and role models, students must be educated in an ethical learning environment that promotes a high standard of honor in scholastic work. Academic dishonesty undermines institutional integrity and threatens the academic fabric of Purdue University. Dishonesty is not an acceptable avenue to success. It diminishes the quality of a Purdue education, which is valued because of Purdue's high academic standards."
Academic dishonesty is defined as follows: "Purdue prohibits "dishonesty in connection with any University activity. Cheating, plagiarism, or knowingly furnishing false information to the University are examples of dishonesty." [University Regulations, Part V, Section III, B, 2, a] Furthermore, the University Senate has stipulated that "the commitment of acts of cheating, lying, and deceit in any of their diverse forms (such as the use of substitutes for taking examinations, the use of illegal cribs, plagiarism, and copying during examinations) is dishonest and must not be tolerated. Moreover, knowingly to aid and abet, directly or indirectly, other parties in committing dishonest acts is in itself dishonest." [University Senate Document 72-18, December 15, 1972]"
IMPORTANT: I will assign a grade of F (zero) to written work that violates this policy, and reserve the right to fail policy violators for the course. I also reserve the right to initiate proceedings with the Dean of Students, for particularly egregious cases of academic dishonesty. If you have any questions about this policy, please ask.
In the event of a major campus emergency, course requirements, deadlines and grading percentages are subject to changes that may be necessitated by a revised semester calendar or other circumstances. You can acquire updated information from the course website, by emailing me, or by contacting me through the English Department at 765-494-3740.
The instructor will stick closely to the course calendar -- it is important that you keep up. When possible, you may certainly complete assignments early, but you must complete them on time. Much of what you do for this class quickly leads to another assignment. And often, your postings and comments are part of a larger discussion that will not wait for you. It will also be difficult for you to do your part in group projects if you miss assigned deadlines. Thus, the majority of missed class assignments cannot be made up. If a serious and unavoidable problem arises, however, you should contact your instructor by email prior to the deadline to determine whether or not an extension for the work will or will not be granted. Late work will rarely, if ever, be accepted without prior approval.
Follow the links at the bottom of this page for a schedule of assignments for each week this semester. Within each week, you will find daily listings of assignments. Each bullet point for the day is a different task for you to complete. Unless specifically noted otherwise, all assignments are to be completed by midnight on the day listed.
This course calendar may be updated throughout the semester. I'll notify you about any major changes, but you are still responsible for keeping up with the current schedule.
IMPORTANT: You must visit all of the links provided within the course calendar. There are many links to follow and read. Make sure you visit all of them. Some links provide easy access to other parts of the class site which will help you in your assignments. Some links are to required readings. Others provide you with detailed instructions on completing the assignments. Eventually, you may come to know the instructions which supplement assignments that are repeated throughout the course, but it's still a good idea to continue to revisit the instructions to make sure that you are satisfying all of the requirements.
By Monday, January 7, at midnight
By Wednesday, January 9, at midnight
describe where you are from
give your course of study and year
talk about your career goals
tell what you would like to get out of this course
share at least one thing personal about yourself (a hobby, your favorite sport, a favorite activity, etc.
By Friday, January 11 at midnight
Check out Week 2. No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, January 14 at midnight
Browse sample software documentation:
By Wednesday, January 16 at midnight.
Reading Response, AKA Blogging Assignment
By Friday, January 18 at midnight
Check out Week 3 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
Monday, January 21 is MLK Jr. Day
No activities scheduled
By Wednesday, January 23 at midnight
By Friday, January 25 at midnight
Topic: Introduction to usability testing
Reading:
Student responsibilities:
Check out Week 4 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, contact the instructor.
By Monday, January 28 at midnight
Today's topic: Documentation review (activity)
Student responsibilities:
By Wednesday, January 30 at midnight
Today's topic: Usability testing (activity)
Reading:
Student responsibilities:
By Friday, February 1 at midnight
Today's topic: Completion/revision of Quick Guide Project deliverables (activity)
Check out Week 5 . No later than today, you should read through the course calendar for the following week. Make sure that you understand all of the assignments. If you have any questions, email the instructor.
By Monday, February 4 at midnight
Today's topic: Introduction to the White Paper Project
Reading
White paper resources
- Chapter 22 (pp. 649-50), Technical Communicaton Today
- Michael Knowles' "How to Write a White Paper"
Open source resources
- List of often-used open source programs
- The Open Source Initiative (includes a definition of OS , along with descriptions of the rationale behind OSS and the larger OS movement)
- Open Source Initiative's Open Source Definition
- OSI's history of the term "open source"
- Open Source Software Institute
- SourceForge (describes various OS projects)
- Creative Commons (addresses copyright issues regarding OSS and other online documents/projects)
- Free Software Foundation (also addresses copyright issues, and sponsors the GNU Project and the GNU Public License -- another relatively flexible copyright system)
- Open Source - GNU Project - Free Software Foundation
Finally, rate your interests in the following project categories (5=most interested, 1=least interested)
- Technology
- Industry
- Business
- Government
- Science
- Education
- Nonprofit organizations
Based on your responses, I will place each of you into a 3-4 member team for Project 2. Post your responses to an individual blog post by midnight tonight. You will be placed into groups by noon Wednesday.
Reading Response
Post a reading response by Friday at midnight. Suggested Prompts: 1) Discuss your initial thoughts regarding white papers and/or open source technologies. What do you hope to learn from this project? At this point, what do you see as this project's most challenging aspect? How do you plan to approach this aspect -- for the project's sake and for the sake of your own learning/discovery? 2) Discuss within a blog post your reactions to each of the three sample white papers (see Thursday's reading). Which one seems the most "professional"? Which one seems the most "knowledgeable"? Which one seems the most "credible"? Which one seems the most "accessible"? 3) How does the concept of open source challenge or support traditional ideals of progress, democracy, capitalism, copyright, or intellectual property?
DUE: Quick Guide Project (attach all project deliverables to the same blog post!)
By Wednesday, February 6 at midnight
Project Groups. I will have placed each of you into a group for Project 2 by noon today. Look for group placements to be posted to the course website by that time; then, by clicking on the members link, locate the e-mail addresses for each group member and send a brief introduction of yourself. You should consider sharing alternate email, IM, phone number, and any other contact information you feel is relevant for collaborating and communicating in Project 2. From this point on, the group is responsible for keeping in contact with each other and communicating as necessary to complete the project.
Begin working in your white paper groups -- and develop a project topic/focus by this Friday. Here's what you'll need to do by then:
Reading
Here are some additional open-source-related readings:
Here are a few links to some high-profile "collaborations" between open-source projects and manufacturers of proprietary programs/technologies:
By Friday, February 8 at midnight
Read the following:
After reading my "lecture notes," look at these sample white papers:
REMINDER: You will need to post 5 comments/replies to last week's blog posts sometime this week (preferably before Friday). Please post your comments/replies as Comments to your classmates' blog posts, or as Comments to your classmates' comments on your blog post.
Monday, February 11
Topic: White papers, as a genre
Reading:
Sample white papers:
Wednesday, February 13
REMINDER: You will need to post 5 comments/replies to last week's blog posts sometime this week (preferably before Friday). Please post your comments/replies as Comments to your classmates' blog posts, or as Comments to your classmates' comments on your blog post.
Monday, February 18
Research and the White Paper, part 2: identification/selection/analysis of sources, research methodologies, audiences, and points of access
Reading
Browse the following examples:
Current events
- GPLv3 and Voting Machines (from the FSF website)
- Massachusetts: Open Document Format Follow-up (blog)
- A working list of apps not working on Vista (blog, published on ZDNet.com)
- 'Jambo' to open source software (from BBC News)
Source types
- Second life goes open source (CNN, a general news site)
- A New Open-Source Politics (technology column published on general news site)
- TechNewsWorld (technology-specific news provider -- link goes to Open Source section)
- NewsForge ("the online newspaper for Linux and Open Source)
- Intellectual Property Law -- An Overview of "Open Source" Software Licenses (professional organization, from the American Bar Association)
- XTech 2005 -- 24027 May -- Amsterdam RAI Centre (conference proceedings)
- The odyssey of Open Source software ("historical," posted January 29, 1999)
- When corporations attack (blog, from ZDNet writer Dana Blankenhorn)
Best Open Source Software for the Macintosh (review, from Devanshu Mehta, Apple Matters website)
- Intel: Only "Open" for Business (discussion list thread, hosted by SlashDot)
- Understanding the Gen 2 Smart Label Supply Chain: What Retail Supply Chain Professionals Need to Know (white paper, from Texas Instruments)
- Open Source in the Phillipines (case study, from Intel)
- Microsoft and Open Source (podcast, from CIO)
- Open Source in the Public Sector: How the State of Oregon Uses SugarCRM... (58 min. webcast, from SugarCRM, an open source vendor)
Blogging assignment:
Wednesday, February 20
Research and the white paper, part 3: MLA, APA, and CGOS (online) styles
Reading:
Friday, February 22
Crafting engaging prose, while making your point
Reading:
Annotated bibliographies are due tonight by midnight. Post your annotated bibliography to the story post containing your proposal.
REMINDER: You will need to post 5 comments/replies to last week's blog posts sometime this week (preferably before Friday). Please post your comments/replies as Comments to your classmates' blog posts, or as Comments to your classmates' comments on your blog post.
Monday, February 25:
"In-class" work: White Paper Project, draft 1
By Wednesday, February 27, at midnight
"In-class" work: White Paper Project, draft 1
By Friday, February 29, at midnight
Peer review: White Paper Project
REMINDER: You will need to post 5 comments/replies to last week's blog posts sometime this week (preferably before Friday). Please post your comments/replies as Comments to your classmates' blog posts, or as Comments to your classmates' comments on your blog post.
Monday, March 3
Topic: Implementing visuals into the white paper
Reading
Blogging assignment
Wednesday, March 5
Document design and the white paper
Reading
Sample white papers:
Friday, March 7
Review of writing styles for white papers
DUE: Draft 1, white paperSample technical marketing document (Volkswagen Golf)
Sample technical specifications (Apple MacBook Air)
Blogging assignment:
In an individual blog post, discuss your initial reactions regarding the Technical Marketing Project. Post your response to your blog by midnight Friday.
Scan the following online documents
Marketing websitesDemographics research articles, blogs, etc.
- Selling to Seniors
- 50-plus (a blog about marketing to the 50+ crowd, by a 50+ man)
- Marketing to the Affluent Class
- Changing nature of pickup trucks (from the Boston Globe, July 2006)
- Low-Income Consumers Pay Higher Prices
From Bose
Other products
Each individual will:
Each group will:
Post your response to your individual blog by Friday at midnight.
Monday, April 14
Activity: Work on Draft 3 of your white papers -- which will be due by midnight on Tuesday, April 15 for peer review on Wednesday, April 16
Wednesday, April 16
Peer review: technical marketing documents
Friday, April 18
"In-class" work: technical marketing documents
DUE: technical marketing documents (by midnight)
In-class work: white paper groups (revisions)
In-class work: technical marketing groups (revisions)
Monday, April 28
Remember to complete an individual project log this week in your blog! Please do separate project logs for White Paper Project revisions and for the Marketing Materials Project.
Each White Paper Project group will:
Wednesday, April 30
Each Technical Marketing Project group will:
Friday, May 2
Each individual will
Finally: Congratulations -- you're done! Have a good break and/or graduation -- and enjoy the holidays!
This section of the course syllabus contains additional guidelines for completing assignments and support materials for using this site.
Some of you may be in search of an avatar or image to use in the profile that you created for yourself when you registered. If so, here are some suggestions:
An avatar is just an image that "stands-in" for your picture and can be an object, artwork, a photo, or something else that might convey some aspect of your identity, personality, or interests. So, for example, someone interested in biking might use an image of a bike as an avatar rather than a personal picture. The image works best if it's in jpg, gif, or png format, and the dimensions should be (about) 85x85 so that it displays correctly (and doesn't get squished when displayed, for example).
To find an existing avatar to use for free, you could look at a site like these. If you have a Yahoo! ID (free to get, if not), you can get some nice ones:
or try
You could also take an existing image of yourself and then create a picture by cropping out the part you don't want. If you haven't used an image editing program before, that can be a bit tricky. But if you have, just use the crop tool to draw a box around the part of the image you want to use, crop it, and then resize it so that it's about 85x85 pixels.
If you have a larger photo and would like help to make it into an avatar, send it to your instructor as an email attachment. Your instructor can help you from there.
For this class, you'll have to learn at least one HTML tag, the one for making hyperlinks.
It's easy to learn. Check it out:

Your link will now show up in your test.
Here is how you make links in traditional HTML coding. Still easy, but it doesn't show up with our rich-text settings and input format.
<a href=""></a>
is the tag itself without any information in it. Within the quotes, you'll put the url, or web address, for the site which you want to link to. In between the ><, you'll put the text you want displayed on the screen.
For example, the url for slashdot is http://slashdot.org/. And if you want to make the word Slashdot a link in a sentence to the website in a blog post, type in,
<a href="http://slashdot.org/">Slashdot</a> is a well known community blog site.
To get
Slashdot is a well known community blog site.
HTML is picky and it's easy to make a careless mistake. Don't include any extra spaces in the HTML tag. Make sure that you include "http://" as a part of your web address. In fact, one of the easiest ways to make sure that you get the URL correct is to copy and paste it from the address bar of a browser window currently displaying the page.
See? Not too difficult. But there's one more thing . . . .
Avoid merely posting the URL as a link:
Notice how this doesn't convey much information. Better to have put the page title (often found either on the page or in the window bar at the top) or link to part of your text (think of the examples in this site). At the same time, really long URL's won't word wrap at the end of a line. They may cause problems with the way that text is displayed on web pages.
For review, check out Chapter 30 in The Thomson Handbook, "The Basics of HTML Coding" (p. 664).
Portable Document Format (PDF) is a file format created by Adobe Acrobat and useful for sharing printer ready versions of documents. Unlike when files are shared between different productivity applications (i.e., word processing, spreadsheet) or different versions of the same productivity software, the same layout and typographic styles are maintained regardless of the computer environment. What the author sees when creating a PDF is exactly what the receiver of the file sees and can print out on their computer. Consequently, PDFs are particularly useful for sending resumes, cover letters, and other business documents where layout and presentation is critica. Writers want all of the effort they put into formatting professional-looking documents to be maintained.
PDFs are typically viewed using Adobe Reader (which is free to download). However, Adobe Reader will not produce PDFs. As you will soon be submitting drafts of cover letters, resumes, and other documents in PDF format, make sure that you can successfully generate a PDF using one of the following means:
Imagine the following scenario:
You have a great idea for a project for your department at work. Because it will require significant resources and funding, the senior manager in your department has asked you to prepare a ten-page proposal.
After working on the proposal for a while, the senior manager sends you an email requesting to see your draft in progress. The proposal is far from complete, but you fire off a reply saying "Here is my working draft," and attach it. The next day, you receive another email from the senior manager full of feedback which you are obligated to take. However, the feedback asks you to revise your proposal in new directions, quite contrary to what you had planned, effectively taking over the direction of the proposal. You now have to discard many good ideas you had for development. Those sections where you knew you needed the most help--they were not addressed at all.
This happens all the time in getting response to our writing. We get proofreading corrections when we need ideas; we get heavy revision suggestions when the draft needs to be proofread to meet a deadline.
To elicit useful and focused responses from readers (during peer review, for example), we must solicit good response. In the above scenario, if the writer had explained to the senior manager where she needed help in the draft and what her plans were for further development, it's quite possible that the feedback would have been more focused and helpful. So when asking for feedback on a document, explain to the responder
Once you've defined your needs, your reviewer is more likely to shape their feedback effectively for you. As a reviewer, it's much easier to address the writer's concerns than to try to guess what might or might not be useful to the writer.

Posting comments, as you will soon see, is easier than creating and sending an email.
If you don't see an add new comment link, you are most likely not logged in.
Note: You can use the Comment viewing options to change the way that comments are displayed on the page. Experiment with this feature and see which configuration works best for you.
Posting to your individual weblog is a little more complex than posting a comment, but after a couple of times, you'll find it as easy as email.