The initial comments on our first draft of the white paper project were returned to us this week. We already had a good idea on where most of the pictures would come from and where they would be placed in the paper so we were off to a good start. Overall, the comments were mostly positive and very helpful. The main problems with the paper were that certain areas needed a little more work in order to better describe our plan. Besides this, only a few gramatical errors were slowing us down.