The open source on cell phones project went well, we had to do some adjustments such as relating figures to our paper and doing a better job of organizing our paper. When the paper was finally complete I felt that if some one wanted to know about this new technology that they could read our paper and get some good valuable information. The people that were in my group communicated well and did a good job of splitting up the paper which could be hard due to the length. The paper had a good structure and I like the visuals that we used to deliver the point more clearly.

The technical marketing project ended up looking very professional as well as being written in a professional manner. After saying that I think overall our technical marketing document was definitely a success. I think the document would be appealing to the normal college student, it had a survey that would definitely get someone interested in the product if they were setting there bored and reading the flyer. I think it was a good idea to use the flyer for, because it was simple and would not scare readers away because of to much information.

Attached is a copy of my quick guid project and my Questionnaire.

When I started looking down the
page the first thing I ran across was the paragraph titled “throw out the first
waffle” which he says is used to describe divorce in a first marriage. This
portion of Gar’s tips to suck-less writing explains how a lot of times young
writers will use the first few paragraphs to explain the subject, and pretty
much just waste paper and time. So he says you might as well just throw those
first paragraphs out. After reading this I can think back and remember myself