Bad sentence-length definitions
Posted April 6th, 2008 by suzanne
For each of the following examples, think about (a) in what context the term might require definition; (b) how the definition itself could be improved.
- A GMO is a genetically modified organism.
- A thermometer measures temperature.
- A thermocouple measures temperature.
- A strike is when workers stop working.
- A weed is any plant growing where it shouldn't.
- Networking is when you connect up computers or people.
(Exercise adapted from Mike Markel, Technical Communication)