English 108: Advanced Composition

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Comments on the Projects Continued.

Austen:
Wow, your project looks crazy cool. I like how you have journal and thoughts from both before and after the experience of war. Your writing was really good and I was enjoying listening to you read it. It really sounded like a soldier telling his story. Your powerpoint was fantastic, the pictures you found were perfect. Very, very nice.

Amber:
So Golf sounds really interesting. It's never been something that I have felt interested in, so I don't know much about it. I find it hysterical that golf stands for gentlemen only, ladies forbidden! That's pretty crazy. From what you said, it sounds like your project will be really good. Smiling

Kyle, Matt, and Colin:
Your powerpoint presentation was really cool and it was unfortunate that the videos didn't work. You did a good job explaining them though. You really seemed to know what you were talking about. You really seemed to have put a lot of thought into it and be wanting to help them. Very cool.

Scotty and Darrin:
So I had no idea that there were really still people out there that are like the old time pirates! That is cool! Even though they aren't the greatest people, haha. You both seemed really interested in your topic and the power point with the voice over was amazing! you did a fantastic job.

Megan, Morgan, and Melissa:
Your website was really great, I never would have thought of doing that, because I know nothing about websites. It looked really thourough and organized. Kudos to you for thinking of sharing it with the world. Smiling

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