Melanie:
Wow, I've never even heard of bisexual polyamorous people before, so your project was very interesting. I like you idea of making it a story, because I love reading and I know I would find it interesting. Your story definitely sounds like it will be a good thing for people to read so that they do not assume and then judge others without knowing what the other person is all about.

Emily:
I am very impressed that you thought to make a scrapbook! I did a travelogue last summer and it was hard work, so good for you! A scrapbook sounds like a very effective way to join a fictional story with real fact by having artifacts and accessories along with the text. The ideas and emotions you described are also intriguing and I would love to page through the finished product!

Harini:
Your presentation was very interesting; I don't really know anything about Bedouin people. Your slides had some really good pictures and interesting facts. I can tell you enjoyed putting it together. I thought it was good how many aspects of their lives you included as well; very thorough.

Allison:
Your presentation was very interesting as well. I haven't been in a relationship, much less a long distance one, until recently, and ove the summer it will me more long distance than it is now. Your slides were very good, I like the way they go like a movie, but I did think there was a lot of text on them. You could thin it out or make sure the viewer has time to read them. But your information was really good--being direct quotes and all. It was easier to relate to since you knew the people and could describe them to us.

Joey:
Very cool project, very patriotic. It looks like it will be really good and what you had so far was fantastic, as far as the picture and set up. Kudos to you and good luck.

Andrea:
I was very interested in your project because I also have a heart for people with mental illnesses. I've been around several and one thing I've always wanted to know was what was actually going on in their heads. I would love to read your finished project, I really really like the idea of the journal.