English 108: Advanced Composition
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thanks guys
first off, i would like to thank everybody for their feedback in regards to the whole presentation thing, especially amber and ashley for their evenly distributed smiley faces. the good comments were very reassuring and the constructive criticism is useful. it looks like i'll be working on mixing some extra happiness into the scrapbook this week...
i thought that all of the first presentations worked out really well, especially since there was no example to work off of. i personally, still wasnt 100% sure about what the whole presentation thing entailed...so...kudos to us is what im getting at here.
i feel like im being crazy repetitive here but:
Melanie: the fact that you picked a topic i knew nothing about kept it interesting. also, you had a pretty fair shot at molding my thoughts considering that i was so ignorant in regards to it. i like that the you made it known that the whole polyamorous thing was not for you, but managed to keep me from feeling negatively towards the subject.
Harini: well gosh,i dont have a ton to say about your presentation except that you were really well informed. i think the fact that i dont have many words is good and bad. good, because there were no obnoxious flaws/many flaws at all. bad, because it didnt really stick out in my mind. you know, i think it was just slightly lackluster. i feel mean saying that. i dont mean it to be though. i just mean to say that it was good, but could use a little glitter. pure constructive critisism i swear.
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