cover letter

my thoughts

This is a good cover letter and I did not find much wrong with it. First of all though, I would skip a line after each paragraph, allowing some more white on the paper. This will help the reader to distinguish between paragraphs more and give their eyes a rest as they transition into the next paragraph. Also, you left one hyperlink on your email address at the bottom of the page. I think if you're handing the resume in person then you can take the link off. But if you’re sending the resume to their website or to someone’s email then I think you can leave it on.