michael @ Thu, 11/09/2006 - 13:10
| Project: | OSDDP Project |
| Component: | Documentation |
| Category: | revision |
| Priority: | normal |
| Assigned: | michael |
| Status: | needs review |
| Attachment: | Project 3_A780_Young.pdf (13.89 KB) |
Description
Attached is our ENGL 420S Project 3 Proposal.
Updates
| #1 submitted by michael on Thu, 11/09/2006 - 13:11 | |||||
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| #2 submitted by Anonymous on Thu, 11/23/2006 - 14:00 | |||||
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| #3 submitted by AdrianneG on Mon, 11/27/2006 - 22:59 | |||||
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We are not positive that our design layout on the first inner fold out with the two pictures on the bottom is the best way to show this. We would also like to know if we need to include more information or not and if we did a good job making the product appealing to our audience. Thank you for your feedback. | |||||
| #4 submitted by michael on Tue, 12/05/2006 - 01:21 | |||||
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This second draft of the marketing brochure is still under revision. The main focus on the revisions done is on readability, primarily changing some of the over-lapping words in the informational paragraphs. Some other focus we are looking to improve on would be on asthetics. If anyone has suggestions, please let us know. |