stephen1 @ Mon, 10/17/2005 - 21:18
| Project: | OSDDP Project |
| Component: | White Paper |
| Category: | task |
| Priority: | normal |
| Assigned: | Rob Pitts |
| Status: | completed |
Description
Our paper takes an in depth look into the workings of the Fedora Project. Prior to this assignment no one in our group was familiar with this topic so it was definitately an interesting time trying to research and put together all of the information. When reviewing our paper, please take a look at the overall depth and tone of it. We chose to "divide and conquer" and we want to see if we had a good flow and consistent tone throughout the entire whitepaper. We had to hurry a little at the end, so review our introduction and conclusion and see if it fits with the scope of the paper.
Updates
| #1 submitted by David Blakesley on Thu, 10/20/2005 - 05:24 | ||||||||||||||
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Here is a copy of the white paper draft with some comments and changes inserted. Track Changes are turned on so that you can see the suggestions. There are also comments and even a few longer ones that I inserted in blue text so that you could spot them easily (and remove them later). Hope this helps straighten out a few things! --Dave | ||||||||||||||
| #2 submitted by stephen1 on Fri, 10/21/2005 - 21:07 | ||||||||||||||
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After looking over Professor Blakesley's review it looks like we have a lot of updating to do. When we had done our first draft we are all a little confused on the fedora project, and we greatly appreciate all of the feedback Once we get more research done on these areas we will be able to get the ball rolling a little bit better. The breakdown with our paper was that the terms all got intertwined and in all reality, they stand for completely different things. We are still planning on keeping some parts of our paper, but we are going to have to cut a lot of areas out due to the length of it if we are adding these sections. | ||||||||||||||
| #3 submitted by Rob Pitts on Fri, 10/28/2005 - 17:49 | ||||||||||||||
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After our first draft of our white paper, we realized that there was a lot of confusion surrounding terminology in our paper. Not only was this confusion felt by the readers of our paper, but by our own group members. Without meaning to, we had interchanged three very different terms throughout our entire paper, and in the end had created more confusion than necessary. After some more careful research and a better understanding of the topic, this is our second draft of our white paper. In this draft we talk about the Fedora Core, Fedora, and the Fedora Project (community). They all seem to be very similar terms, but they are in essence very different. We hope to instill in the readers the in depth differences behind these three terms. We would like for you to tell us what you think about our context and the flow of our paper. We would also like for you to tell us if there are any parts that you do not feel make sense to you. We need to make sure you understand and grasp the real differences in these terms, as we now do. Thank you for your time!!! | ||||||||||||||
| #4 submitted by stephen1 on Wed, 11/02/2005 - 16:08 | ||||||||||||||
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Here is our final draft of our project in pdf format. We changed the original issue title from "Fedora Project" to "Fedora Project, Fedora, or Fedora Core?" to incorporate the broader scope of our paper. We hope that after reading our paper, you are as well informed about the different forms of Fedora as we have become. Enjoy!! Rob Pitts | ||||||||||||||
| #5 submitted by Rob Pitts on Wed, 11/02/2005 - 18:21 | ||||||||||||||
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Here is the final draft of the original white paper project in html format. We hope that after reading it that you are as well informed about the differences between Fedora, Fedora Project, and Fedora Core as we have become. Rob Pitts |




