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I really like how you put the documentation together. It helps to put pictures in to actually show what to do. Nice, but I do agree with switching how to create a comment and edit a comment. The create a comment should come first.

first of all, why would you teach people how to edit a comment before showing them how to create the comment?

otherwise it looks good

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progress report looks good. i could nt find the gantt chart.

good job. very thorough

Integrating your gantt chart into your progress report would be helpful to readers. It gives them an idea of the timeframe you're working with.

Good start. I like the sans-serif font, which makes it look crisp and easy to read.

I would suggest:
(1) adding a title
(2) making the tasks grammatically parallel
(3) adding a column that specifies who is assigned to what task (unless you are all working on all of them?)

The task list looks good. It is very thorough and indepth. If this is followed I believe that the final product will be an asset to the website.

could have a step that shows your actual work on the project not just the drafting of the documents for class.

I think this task list is definitely on the right track. For your project, it makes sense to lay out the tasks associated with writing the tutorial itself (or, in other words, project 3 rather than project 2). And you do that here.

Another strength of the task list are the first and last steps: you get people to the OSDDP and you get them logged off at the end.

Step 6 is great! It gets the user interacting with the site and the rating feature is a fantastic idea; it will give us some good usability data.

Finally, I like the heirarchy of steps and substeps-- you have a lot of information here but your list isn't so long that it's overwhelming.

Some suggestions:
I'm not sure if/ why step 4 is necessary-- is there anywhere on the OSDDP where you have to specify your user type?

Steps 2-4 seem like part of the final documentation itself than the tasks you will need to document (which are in step 5). You may want to edit this part so that it focuses on the tasks necessary to create (rather than use) the tutorial.

Finally, the tutorial probably should be free-standing or part of the user's guide rather than embedded in a single issue. That's because you can post a comment on any issue in the site-- and also older issues tend to get moved to the later pages and so are harder to find.

This is a test to see how the comment function works